Mexico Chapter Two Part Two

[muchtvsocfic]

See previous post for disclaimer.

Had to post chapter in two parts.

Chapter Two Part One is posted below.

Comments

[zbyszko]

Still loving this, especially your Ana and Tessa.

[muchtvsocfic]

Thanks Z.

I like them too, lol.

[fifimom]

"if Ryan never finds Volchok, there’s no reason for him to live."
“Ryan, just stop,” Ana says quietly. “It’s okay.”
Let me take a minute to catch my breath because baby this chapter just took it away.
I'm still sitting on the edge of my seat even though I have read it 3 times.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter but part of me dreads it because I know it will the end and I love reading you too much.

[muchtvsocfic]

I'm glad the tension worked. I was worried the chapter was too rushed.

Thanks again for always supporting me FiFi. I wonder if you know how much I truly appreciate it.

[60schic]

Well, we did get at least one sweaty body in this part, though I don't think this was what you meant in your first A/N.

Will he be able to burn out the rage before he kills himself? Or Volchok?

[muchtvsocfic]

Well...Ryan did masturbate....that's something a little out of my usual puritan writing, lol.

He will not burn the rage.

He is going to kill Volchok by getting him drunk and then butterfingering him off a cliff.

Wait, that already happened.

Thanks for reading Chic.

[60schic]

'Course, you had him pleasure himself off-story! But hey - I'll take it.

Butterfingers...*chuckles*

*Johnny-Stay-Splat*

[muchtvsocfic]

I don't know how to write masturbation without it sounding like a medical procedure.

but overnighter wrote an amazing story last week with some ryan solo action. if you didn't read it...you should.

[caligirl59]

That was fantastic,so much simmering rage my laptop is almost shaking!Cant wait to see what happens if next.

[muchtvsocfic]

Thanks so much Cali.

I'm already working on getting the next chapter done. (I think it's going to be 5 parts instead of four.)

[katwoman76]

*sigh* Soo good.
But also so painful for Ryan, in more than the physical sense.

[muchtvsocfic]

Yes.

Imagine that.

I am inflicting pain on Ryan in more than one way.

Thanks Kat.