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2006 OC Sentence Challenge Part Two

Jul 06, 2006 20:17

Title: When The World Is Frosted White
Part: 2/2 (Click on tag for part one.)
Status: Complete
Author: muchtvs
Rating: PG 13
Sentence Prompt: "Marissa is stuck between Heaven and Earth, having to make sure Ryan forgives himself before she can cross over."
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Comments 49

georgley July 7 2006, 02:25:34 UTC

I don't really read OC fic anymore but this one made me cry.

muchtvs July 8 2006, 04:21:08 UTC

Awwwwwww.

*hug* that you still read me.

anonymous July 7 2006, 02:27:58 UTC

That was beyond beautiful.
You took my breath away and brought tears to my eyes.
Thank you for that.

smc36 July 7 2006, 02:33:46 UTC

Yeah - doh!!!!!!!!!
That was me with the no breath and apparently the no brain.
Ish to be so stupid.

muchtvs July 8 2006, 04:22:34 UTC

You are not stupid. You are considerate for reading and commenting.

muchtvs July 8 2006, 04:21:28 UTC

Hello???? Whom am I speaking to???????

southerngirl22 July 7 2006, 03:36:16 UTC

That was beautiful, much!
I loved this:
Marissa goes here and there, in out of her memories randomly, and she’s sure time must be lapsing. But it’s passing like a folded blanket fresh out of the dryer, hot and in layers instead of spread out straight.
Very cool...very clever.

Marissa's memories and visits bounced all over the place, but it was never confusing. How did you do that? *stands and applauds*

muchtvs July 8 2006, 04:24:12 UTC

Lord I was worried that no one would be able to follow it.

Whew!

I love it when you pop in SG.

Again...as I was driving to my mum's in Illinois...I always think of you and the barns and old homes I pass. You need to post some of your lovely pics.

knightdawn July 7 2006, 03:38:50 UTC

That was brilliant

muchtvs July 8 2006, 04:25:19 UTC

*blush*

arualms July 7 2006, 06:13:14 UTC

That was truly amazing. They way you connected the different sets of memories to give us an impression of what Marissa liked and didn't like about her former life, and how huge a part Ryan played in everything important was great. I really enjoyed seeing his life evolving through the filter of his dreams and Marissa's perception of them. And unfortunately, Ryan beeing emotionally unavailable even to someone he loves when it comes to his part is a definite possibility. I'm glad they are working on it :)

Thanks for writing this.

muchtvs July 8 2006, 04:26:19 UTC

Thanks ! for reading it A.

:o)