Thank you, and don't be scared! Different is good. It'll make your entry stand out. I haven't read it yet--just got in from work--but definitely will this evening.
I haven't posted it yet - my internet was down all day yesterday as you know - and I didn't bring the document to the office today. I will post it tonight almost for sure! And for voting - how does that work?
After the deadline for story submissions is up, Gary will post a poll, and ask people to vote for their favorites. No need to limit yourself, vote for as many as you like.
I really like these characters, they feel very real.
This line especially stood out to me: "I love them because they're my parents, but I also respect what they're trying to accomplish. I don't have to believe in God to do either one of those things." Plus your opening line, just hits you like a radish to the head, as faerie_spark said. xDD
Thank you so much, that's always my main concern, that my characters feel like real people. Tony and Kellie are pretty young, around 14 or 15, so I hope I captured that adequately. To me, Tony in particular feels VERY 14. :)
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But I like this! :-)
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And for voting - how does that work?
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After the deadline for story submissions is up, Gary will post a poll, and ask people to vote for their favorites. No need to limit yourself, vote for as many as you like.
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This line especially stood out to me: "I love them because they're my parents, but I also respect what they're trying to accomplish. I don't have to believe in God to do either one of those things." Plus your opening line, just hits you like a radish to the head, as faerie_spark said. xDD
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These are great characters and I love the use of radishes.
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