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mtgat

JLU: Kaddish (4/4)

Jan 06, 2006 14:29

***
Kaddish (4/4)
a Justice League Unlimited story
by Merlin Missy
Copyright 2005
PG
***
Chapter Three
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rverse, dcau-fic

Comments 20

evillittletwit January 6 2006, 21:12:04 UTC

I cried.

More feedback to come, once I've recovered. =)

mtgat January 6 2006, 22:32:39 UTC

I made you cry yay. ;)

dotsomething January 7 2006, 02:19:56 UTC

Hurray, it's posted!

I really do love this.

mtgat January 7 2006, 02:45:17 UTC

Yay! :) So the new ending works for you? Cool.

dotsomething January 7 2006, 03:48:48 UTC

Heh. Yes.

mtgat January 7 2006, 04:22:42 UTC

Good. ;)

billa1 January 7 2006, 03:44:34 UTC

You know I loved this tale. On so many levels this story works and works well. This was a great story, well told (and yes I am - so deal with it). :D

mtgat January 7 2006, 04:03:07 UTC

*deals* Yay and thank you. :D

ninjetti75 January 7 2006, 08:53:54 UTC

Hooooooooooooooooo, Boy.

That was really good.

You made them all so... ..real.
This was jam-packed with emotion, and all of it resonated beautifully.

Thanks for sharing it with us.

mtgat January 7 2006, 14:57:50 UTC

*grin* Thank you. The goal is generally to hit the "Real" button, so cool.

raynos January 7 2006, 10:06:41 UTC

... Oh my.

I think I really am in LOVE with your Wally. The whole progress of how he tried to cope with the loss of both GL and HG and the bits where he was close to Metamorpho too... Lovely, really lovely. And his antagonism towards Kyle at first makes the ending all the more awesome.

Hmm. If he was still alive BB time I think he'll be weirded out by John and Shayera appearing again. =D

mtgat January 7 2006, 15:36:54 UTC

Oh, Wally is going to be very surprised, I think. :)

I love how Wally is so much more complex than you'd think, just in general. All these powers, and he's still a kid trying to play catch-up to the grownups.

Thanks for the comments!