Not Here - Part 1

[mtemplar_fic]

Title: Not Here
Author: mtemplar
Rating: Adult
Characters: The Doctor (Tenth), Rose Tyler, Jackie Tyler
Disclaimer: I do not own 'Doctor Who' and am making no profit from this fanfiction.
Genre: Humor, Graphic Sex, Romance
Spoilers: Set mid Series 2
Author's Notes: This is a short, somewhat silly follow-up to the events in To Have And Not To Hold. If

Comments

[principia]

I am still convinced the reason Ten was able to convincingly talk soap opera tropes during VotD is a nice extended convalescence with Jackie post-TCI. She's undoubtedly catching him up on what all he's missed! *snerk*

"My barriers," he whispered as he leaned in and tried to nuzzle her neck. "They're down."

I hope Jackie doesn't get too good a look at him-his pupils probably look like he's taken a hit from a tranq dart. XD

[mtemplar_fic]

*slinks back in*

I am still convinced the reason Ten was able to convincingly talk soap opera tropes during VotD is a nice extended convalescence with Jackie post-TCI. She's undoubtedly catching him up on what all he's missed! *snerk*

You know it! Nine wouldn't be caught dead doing such a thing, but Ten would! *grins*

I hope Jackie doesn't get too good a look at him-his pupils probably look like he's taken a hit from a tranq dart. XD

Heh. Unfortunately for Rose, Jackie's going to get a very good look.

[principia]

Heh. Unfortunately for Rose, Jackie's going to get a very good look.

"Bloody hell," Jackie exclaimed, "what happened to you? Oh my god, the knife-thingy-whatever you got stuck with wasn't poisoned or anything, was it? Did they dilate your pupils? Do I need to get you some sunglasses?"

*as Jackie starts making half-baked attempts to assess him for a concussion*

[mtemplar_fic]

*grins*

That's not the excuse I was going to use, but it is a good one!

[ex_miss_pru]

Oh Christ! Quick, Rose! Get rid of your mum and shag the Doctor sharpish!

More please?

[mtemplar_fic]

*grins* Ten agrees with this!

More soon.

[roxyk630]

AUGH! Cruel end point! CRUEL I TELL YOU!

:3 Though, I do love you for it! Can't wait for the next bits. I'm excited to see a semi sequel to To Have and to Hold <3333333

*glee* Thanks for making my morning!!!

[mtemplar_fic]

Oh, come now! It's not like he's on the verge of death at the end of this part! *grins*

And yes, this is just a little ficlet - the bigger one (Ice Planet) is in the wings. And you're very welcome. *hugs*

[principia]

It's not like he's on the verge of death at the end of this part! *grins*

La petite morte, mebbe. XP

[mtemplar_fic]

Or maybe Jackie will bash his head in with a frying pan and then we'll have Eleven, so yeah - maybe he *is* on the verge of death after all! *sniggers*

[butterflyborn]

Yes! YEs!! YES!!! A reason to LOVE Wednesdays again!!!!!!!!!!! *bounce...bounce...bounce...* *hugs author in excitement and unadulterated glee* I've got shivers from that last line. I think Rose has a bit of learning to do with the barriers thing. I hope Jackie doesn't kill him; that would be a really short story. ;-)

(and how could someone NOT be interested in reading the previous story???? Of course those lucky people don't have the killer cliff hangers of doom to contend with)

[mtemplar_fic]

That and there's new Torchwood today too! *grins*

And it's not just Rose who has some learning to do here - Ten isn't helping her by hairtriggering! And hrm... would Jackie necessarily kill him if she got an eyeful... *ponders this*

and how could someone NOT be interested in reading the previous story????

Silly you - I can't imagine THANTH would appeal to a huge audience, but thank you for the kind complement! And what? Killer cliffhangers of doom? You loved them and you know it! *grins some more*

[principia]

And hrm... would Jackie necessarily kill him if she got an eyeful... *ponders this*

Depending on her boyfriend status at the moment, she might be more put out by Rose not keeping her feelings in mind.

"I know it's... whatever it is and all, love, but do you have to rub it in?"

*Jackie pouts, then leans back through the doorway of the kitchen.*

"Mind you, if you're givin' away free peeks..."

[mtemplar_fic]

Jackie: "Are you sure he's not got two of - "
Rose: "MUM!!!"

[electrictoes]

Awesome. More?

[mtemplar_fic]

Thanks! More is on the way soon.