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Jul 28, 2006 23:10

Title: What's Done is Done (1/1)
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Paul Kellerman, Caroline Reynolds
Length: 575 words
Rating: PG-15
Summary: He walks behind her, watching as she transforms herself effortlessly into her new persona, and he’s never been more proud - or more wary - of her.
Author's Note: This is for jaybee65 who's feeling blah and thought ( Read more... )

prison break, caroline reynolds, paul kellerman

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accrues July 28 2006, 14:41:36 UTC
OH THANKYOU, Gen! Finally a fic that isn't S/M, or L/M. It's a breath of fresh air to have something different like this, and especially from you because I enjoy every piece of your writing that I've read. I think all of your PB ones are on my recc list because they're always just so good.

And I ask again: Can I add this to my recc reading list??

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msgenevieve July 28 2006, 14:45:20 UTC
Heh. You're welcome!

I was very bored at work this afternoon and so I kept poking my poor sick friend via email until she threw me a challenge and this is what I wrote for her. It's nice to have a break from the OTP thing everything now and then. *g*

And yes, add away!

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accrues July 28 2006, 14:57:00 UTC
It's lovely, and that's very kind of you :)

Off to add!

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demoerin July 28 2006, 15:35:00 UTC
It's stunning how throwaway phrases capture so much of their relationship and characters. From an appropriately subdued flutter of a rock-steady hand, to the easy exchange about the fate of the chemist, to she might be amenable to renegotiating, it all fits beautifully with their situation. It gives me the same feeling of "creepy but cool" that I get from these characters on-screen, and it's delicious.

(Um, possible typo? her eyes glittering with a raw exhalation - should that be "exhilaration"?)

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msgenevieve July 29 2006, 05:20:11 UTC
It gives me the same feeling of "creepy but cool" that I get from these characters on-screen, and it's delicious.

*grins* Thank you! I'm not all that fussed about the new POTUS, but I'm very conflicted about my feelings for Agent Kellerman - if he was on the same side as my favourite characters, there would be no end to my fangirling of him. *g*

Thanks for the heads up - it was actually supposed to be 'exultation', lol! Have fixed now.

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jaybee65 July 28 2006, 16:39:24 UTC
Squeeeeeee!!!

You've made this Kellerman/Reynolds fan very, very happy. You've got their personalities/mannerisms *down*, even in something so short.

THANK YOU!!

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msgenevieve July 29 2006, 05:30:21 UTC
You're very welcome - I hope it made you feel better! *g*

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snowwhite22 July 28 2006, 22:22:00 UTC
LOL.....stellar! I feel like teasing the President with "Ha Ha Hahaha. They got away. Niener-niener-niener!" LOL

Great adaptation of a scene!

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msgenevieve July 29 2006, 05:21:07 UTC
Yes, I think I liked writing this because it was (a) a chance to play with other characters and make my friend happy (b) a chance to say 'suck eggs, beyotch' to the new POTUS. Heh.

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ficangel July 29 2006, 22:16:50 UTC
This is amazing. I think you've really done a lot with the voice of an essentially loathsome human being here.

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msgenevieve July 30 2006, 04:56:02 UTC
Heh, thank you very much. It's fun to write 'evil' now and then, I think. *g*

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