The Right Road - Chapter Five

[msgenevieve]

Title: The Right Road (5/?)
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael Scofield/Sara Tancredi
Characters: Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi, Lincoln Burrows, Veronica Donovan, Frank Tancredi, various original characters
Rating: PG-15 (but leaning towards S for Saucy in some places), a small dash of UST
Genre: AU, Non-Epilogue-Compliant, Alternate Reality

Comments

[aboutbefore]

God, Jen, this is just too much fun. I love that they want each other immediately - because in what world would they not? And the immediate oversharing. They're just made for each other, no?

Plus, I love that you tagged it "saucy."

[msgenevieve]

Hee, thank you!

because in what world would they not?

That's our story and we're sticking to it, yes? *g*

I love the word saucy. It's not used nearly enough, I feel.

[scribblecat]

“It’s a long and complicated and probably very boring story.”

Yes, I bet.

How do you tell someone you’ve just met that you can’t bear to say goodnight to them?

Aww. He's just a darling.

You are a fantastic weaver. I guess there are points a writer has to hit in any conversation to reveal plot, and instead of hitting those head on, you meander through the night droppping more and more and it flows so effortlessly through their banter. I think that takes exceptional skill, to do dialogue like that.
It's so them, in a scene far removed and it's such an interesting read. I'm really looking forward to coffee, or getting a room :p

[msgenevieve]

Well, you know better than anyone how stuck I was, trying to get this chapter onto paper and make it believable, so THANK YOU. *hugs you*

Maybe they should get coffee and a room? LOL.

[purplemoongrl]

This year is starting out very well with YOU writing this long fic. :) I love that they still give you inspiration because it is hard when they are no longer 'there' and so many fans moving on but I know that for you (and me and some other diehards LOL) they are very hard to resist and noting compares to them.
*hugs you*

I have said it so many times but with the talk talk, you placing the characters in a certain setting and with the little gesters you always make me see them no matter where they are.
I love all this flirting but I am loving the Frank-angst at the end a lot. You know me, lover of the angst.

Favorite part is his reaction to her revelation being a former drunk and her reaction to his reaction about that is just perfect.

[msgenevieve]

Thank you so much, Mo. And may I say it's a delight to have you lurking once more? *squishes you*

Start as you mean to go on, as they say. I figured if I could start off the year by writing on my vacation time, it might be easier to then spend the next year encouraging plotbunnies. We'll see, lol!

Favorite part is his reaction to her revelation being a former drunk and her reaction to his reaction about that is just perfect.

Thanks for saying for that. This is a piece of romantic fiction, after all, but I stil want it to be vaguely believable! *g*

[gennagurl]

I MISS THEM TERRIBLY.

I MISS THEM SO MUCH.

Is it weird that while reading this I feel as though Im watching a movie or something? Like I imagine it so bad I actually see it happening, LOL :)

Thanks for writing this!! :)

[msgenevieve]

Is it weird that while reading this I feel as though Im watching a movie or something?

That is a wonderful thing for me to read, thank you so much! If I can even begin to make you see it in your head, then that makes me very happy! *bounces*

[sandyk1]

Gennagurl is right, I didn't read this chapter I watched it! and it played out just beautifully. There is such "life" in them and I can not wait for more. 2010 will be a good year for M and S for they are safe in your hands. Thank you and Happy New Year.

[msgenevieve]

Thank you! I'm determined to make 2010 my personal 'TPTB's canon can bite me' year. *g*