La Hermana - Hiatus Fic Challenge (1/1)

[msgenevieve]

Title: La Hermana (1/1)
Fandom: Prison Break
Genre: Challenge fic, het, OC
Characters: Michael Scofield, Original Female Character
Rating: PG-13
Length: 317 words
Summary:Mary Sues aren't bad. They're just drawn written that way.
Author's Note: Written for the Is That You, Mary Sue? challenge at pbhiatus_fic. Can I just say now for the record that even

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[chapter_stork]

violet eyes - check!
raven hair - check!
rose tinted lips - check!

What? No mention of what she's wearing? Fail.

LOL. What can I say? I can tell Michael was going to totally fall in love with her and leave Sara, so I'm glad you stopped where you did...

Perfect icon, by the way!

[msgenevieve]

*chortles*

I know, I know. I should have waxed lyrical about her perfect body beneath her plain but somehow very alluring clothing, but I just couldn't do it, lol!

[scribblecat]

*rolls about laughing*
I love that her eyes eyes are violet. Thanks for writing it and thanks for giving Sucre a sister that's more awesome and striking than all the cast put together! *high fives*

[msgenevieve]

I feel so dirty now, and not in a good way! LOL.

[burntcircles]

Isabella Yolanda Sucre, eh? Did the parents run out of creativity by the time they had Fernando? LOL

Fantastic! Thanks for the lulz! *claps*

[msgenevieve]

*grins* Nothing like a good cliched exotic name, is there? *g*

[burntcircles]

Oh, yes. Makes "Sara" dry and forgettable. :)

[scribblecat]

*gigglesnorts*

[sierra_foxx]

Bwah! Oh this is fabulous, Jen. LOL.

You can't go past hair that spills over a gals shoulders, now, can you? *hoots*

I've just posted one too - go look!

[sk56]

Oh, this is just right. Especially

she was holding a gun in her delicate but rock-steady hands

the perfect accessory.

You know, there must be a professional association for Mary Sues and Marty Stus out there somewhere. I wonder what the union meetings are like?