Epiphany - Lincoln/Veronica (NC-17)

[msgenevieve]

Title: Epiphany (3/3)
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters/Pairing: Lincoln Burrows/Veronica Donovan, Michael Scofield
Genre: Het, pre-series
Length: 5,366 words
Rating: NC-17
Summary: That's the problem with epiphanies; you never know when to expect them.
Author's Note: Finally, the last installment of domfangirl's birthday fic. Please forgive me for

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[badboy_fangirl]

“Nice perfume you’re wearing.”

There’s a pointed silence from the other bed, then Michael yawns loudly, his hands linked behind his head as he stares at the ceiling. “Thanks, I like it.”
This is just hilariously perfect. I love it.

As for the rest of the angst fest--there's just nothing to do about that sick feeling of dread these two create in your stomach. They were always doomed, and so no matter what kind of happiness they have for whatever short period of time, the ultimate sadness always hangs over everything about them.

“Feels much longer,” he manages to say, then the rhythm of his hunger for her takes over, pounding through his blood, narrowing the world down to this bed and the feel over her beneath him. Her hands are cool on his hot skin, but the rest of her is warm, flushed with heat against him, her flesh tight and slick around his, and he feels as though his body might dissolve from the sheer pleasure of it.

Just like she did in Texas, she says his name when she comes, her face twisted in a mask of agonized delight, writhing beneath him as though she can never get close enough to him. When he abandons the struggle to hold himself back, his breath harsh in her ear as he thrusts into her one last time, he knows exactly how she feels.
These paragraphs are made of so much win, I'm speechless.

The use of the canon scene was just gorgeous too and enough to make me hope, just as they do for that moment. Like Lincoln I forgot about Crab Simmons until the phone call and then I was thrust back into the harsh reality of *suck.*

Thank you so much. You are now released to go write the inappropriate RPF pr0n *g*

[msgenevieve]

I told you it would finished before your next birthday. *grins*

I am very relieved to see you enjoyed this final chapter. It was never going to end happily, but I think you already knew that, yes? That said, I loved writing it for you, despite the angst. :)

I have already started the RPF, btw. *hugs you*