Steps - Prison Break Hiatus Challenge Fic (1/1)

[msgenevieve]

Title: Steps (1/1)
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Lincoln Burrows, Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi
Pairing: Michael/Sara, Lincoln/? *is mysterious*
Length: 1,379 words
Rating: PG
Summary:To get through the hardest journey we need take only one step at a time, but we must keep on stepping. Written for the Are We There Yet challenge at pbhiatus_fic.

Comments

[muldy]

Aw I really like this. Funny I was just going to write a Michael and Linc random childhood story but you've written one (well the first part of this anyway) so now I can go to bed happy without having to open Microsoft Word.

I really enjoyed it!

[msgenevieve]

Thanks, Fi!

Funny I was just going to write a Michael and Linc random childhood story but you've written one (well the first part of this anyway) so now I can go to bed happy without having to open Microsoft Word.

Oh, I don't think this story lets YOU off the hook in any way, shape or form, young lady. *pokes you*

[badboy_fangirl]

I really liked this too, particularly the juxtapostion of Michael annoying Linc and Linc annoying Michael. Well done.

This line:
A smile twitches at the corners of his mouth, then he turns back to stare at the bus pulling up at the kerb
has me wondering, do they spell curb different in Oz? Just curious if you're being phonetic because you were raised that way, or because like sometimes happens, things slip by.

I'm also curious as to what Sara and Michael's son's name is....

*uses Pouty!Michael on the bus icon*

[msgenevieve]

the juxtapostion of Michael annoying Linc and Linc annoying Michael

I'm subtle, aren't I? *chuckles*

do they spell curb different in Oz?

Yes. 'Kerb' is the British/Australian spelling. 'Curb' there and here means to restrain or control, you know, curbing your appetite or your (hee) enthusiam. I've since realised that you guys use 'curb' for both meanings. Ah, well. Viva la difference, lol! *g*

I'm also curious as to what Sara and Michael's son's name is....

I was annoying vague on that point, wasn't I? At least I gave Lincoln's second son a name. I thought that Lincoln might want to make amends for making fun of his father's name in Colorado. *sighs*

[bijoux83]

At least I gave Lincoln's second son a name. I thought that Lincoln might want to make amends for making fun of his father's name in Colorado. *sighs*
I didn't even make that connection -->Is lame.

You on the other hand are just mean, making me all sniffy over two young boys dealing with losing their mother slowly. OK, so you did make up for it a little by making me laugh with Michael bugging the bus drivers and him brushing up on his Spanish. Because that boy seems to put a spin on 'white boys can't dance'. With him it's more 'Gringos no pueden hablar. Of course, I have yet to see the eight toed wonder get his groove on. Dude, look at that. A plot bunny for you. Funny how that happens.

[msgenevieve]

Because that boy seems to put a spin on 'white boys can't dance'. With him it's more 'Gringos no pueden hablar.

Bwah!

Of course, I have yet to see the eight toed wonder get his groove on. Dude, look at that. A plot bunny for you. Funny how that happens.

Good grief. *hides behind new hiatus fic challenge*

Seriously, I'm very glad you liked it. *g*

[recycledfaery]

This was so beautiful and touching. All of a sudden the "real" scene on the bus means so much more than it did before.

Thanks for sharing your good stories with us.

[msgenevieve]

Thank *you* for reading and taking the time to tell me what you thought - that's the fun of sharing, lol!

[jaybee65]

I love the structure of this piece and the way you thread the theme through each segment! Gorgeous writing as usual.

[msgenevieve]

Thank you, my dear. You know me, I like a good running theme. :)

[happywriter06]

I can't get enough of fics about the brothers together. I love the theme of riding the bus. I just love this.

So is Al Linc and Jane's son? *crosses fingers*

[msgenevieve]

Aww, thank you! :)

So is Al Linc and Jane's son? *crosses fingers*

I deliberately left it vague so that anyone reading could put their own interpretation on it, and I'm very happy for you to see that kid with blonde hair and blue eyes. *g*