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Title: Choice (1/1)
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael Scofield/Dr Sara Tancredi, Lincoln Burrows
Length: 954 words
Rating: PG-15 (a few bad words)
Summary: You’ve driven in silence for the last five miles and that’s just fine with you, because you’re not sure you can talk without betraying the fact that you’re angry enough to smash your ( Read more... )
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael Scofield/Dr Sara Tancredi, Lincoln Burrows
Length: 954 words
Rating: PG-15 (a few bad words)
Summary: You’ve driven in silence for the last five miles and that’s just fine with you, because you’re not sure you can talk without betraying the fact that you’re angry enough to smash your ( Read more... )
Gripping the wheel so tight that your knuckles start to ache, you drive and you think about everything you’ve lost and how close you just came to losing what little you have left.
The look that Linc shot at Michael after he fooled gun-toting-velour-tracksuit-skank-Nika was just priceless - you just knew there was so much he wanted to say right then.
You think of your last, desperate calls to L.J. and to Vee - Christ, Vee - and the pain reaches up and grabs your chest and squeezes it tight. You push the pain down, push it away, because you can’t let yourself think about it now. One day, maybe soon, you’ll be somewhere safe and quiet and you’ll be able to let yourself fall apart. But not now.
This just killed me... *sobs* I liked that you acknowledged his pain over Vee being still there, but that he couldn't deal with it just yet. My heart just breaks for him every time I think about it.
The relationship between the brothers is one of my favourite parts of this show - and you captured it perfectly! Really nice work, Jen! *g*
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The look that Linc shot at Michael after he fooled gun-toting-velour-tracksuit-skank-Nika was just priceless - you just knew there was so much he wanted to say right then.
Yes, and none of it allowed in an 8pm time-slot, lol!
This just killed me... *sobs* I liked that you acknowledged his pain over Vee being still there, but that he couldn't deal with it just yet. My heart just breaks for him every time I think about it.
I had to, because I can't believe that it's not with him every single minute of the day. Perhaps he's telling himself that there's a chance she's still alive, that perhaps she was just wounded, but I don't think so. He's too cynical for that now. *hugs him*
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