HP FIC: No More
Title: No More
Author: MrsTater
Rating & Warnings: PG (Deathly Hallows spoilers)
Format & Word Count: One-shot, 2835 words
Featured Characters: Remus Lupin, Nymphadora Tonks, Antonin Dolohov, Fenrir Greyback, Bellatrix Lestrange, Sirius Black, James Potter, Lily Potter
Summary: It didn't feel at all like she'd imagined it. It didn't feel like ( Read more... )
Author: MrsTater
Rating & Warnings: PG (Deathly Hallows spoilers)
Format & Word Count: One-shot, 2835 words
Featured Characters: Remus Lupin, Nymphadora Tonks, Antonin Dolohov, Fenrir Greyback, Bellatrix Lestrange, Sirius Black, James Potter, Lily Potter
Summary: It didn't feel at all like she'd imagined it. It didn't feel like ( Read more... )
The timeline in the book really confused me, but I was struck by how little time there was in between the birth and the battle, in that no one had even seen little Teddy yet, so I wanted to bring that in. Also, I just didn't understand how such a skilled duelist and an Auror got taken down by people the kids were beating, so I thought exhaustion from being new parents would explain it better.
And of course I had to draw in Remus as father, because he was so adorable announcing Teddy's birth. So proud. I imagine he must have been lovely to Tonks in those months when they're together and she's growing with the baby.
One of the things I felt most cheated by was Tonks not being with Remus when Harry resurrected the Marauders. There should have been some mention of her being there in the background waiting for him! I'm pleased you felt that worked, and the mention of him being cured, too. That was one thing that struck me as a silver lining for them.
I couldn't have hoped for a better compliment than that this made you feel better. Thank you so much for reading, and for your lovely words.
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