HP: Snidgets, Ch. 3

[mrstater]

Title: Snidgets Ch. 3
Author: MrsTater
Rating: R
Word Count: 7386 in ch. 3
Summary: When third year Auror cadet Tonks is assigned a special case, it takes her back to school and into the Defence Against the Dark Arts office. The new professor presents her with a few mysteries of his own, which require a good deal more time to solve -- not to

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[tourdefierce]

If I tell you that I'm frowning a lot will it make your post faster?

She's SO YOUNG! And I just want to beat her over the head with something so very large and Remus is so Remus and wonderful and flirty and "Do you want to solve me?" had me rolling.
Seriously, how can a cheezy line like that actually be sexy? Only with Remus.

The chapter was marvelous, like usual... BUT it made me wrinkle my nose. Can we get to the happen ending filled with lots of snogging and wonderful color changing hair?

Anyway, again... your writing is maddness, in a very good way. Thanks for the update because it was delightful!
Happy writing,
Em

[mrstater]

Thanks for reading! I'm glad to know you enjoyed the chapter, and I hope you like the conclusion next week.

[anywhere_but_nj]

"Apart from the wotcher, you mean?" Remus asked

Hehehe, she gives herself away too easily.

"A very lovely real colour."

Awwww! I bet on Tonks it is really lovely. And I love Remus' shameless flirting.

"Tonks," he said, "I keep a Red Cap, a Grindylow, a Kappa, and a Boggart in my office. I'm more than reasonably certain I can sit across from a hag with mismatched eyes and not be disturbed."

*snerk* that's for sure.
I'm glad he wasn't gaping at her. Although, I'm sure he knows from experience what that's like.

"We established just a moment ago that your real eyes are lovely. I don't think I could really see anything but those when I look at you."

Let the warm fuzzy feelings commence.
Eee, that's so damned adorable!

"That's because it's not a very Christian thing to name a baby girl."

LOL. In her family...yeah, not so much.
Can you even consider them Christian? hahaha

What are you waiting for? Remus is clever, but no one's clever enough to add 'Elphine' to 'close' and get a sum total of 'Nymphadora'!I like the name Elphine

[mrstater]

I'm glad you're continuing to like this fic! I really do have such a blast writing Remus and Tonks during POA, when he can be a bit more confident because he's got a steady job he likes at the place he loves most (even if he is rather guilt ridden about some of his choices, as will come up in future chapters) and Tonks can be less confident as she's coming into her own. Remus' laid-back character would come out more in those days, I think, and Tonks would be tense, which, as happens here, is not always a good mix. ;) So glad you liked the flirtyness turning into a fight! Thanks for your lovely comments!

[anywhere_but_nj]

Yes, the Remus confidence in POA is amazing and you really do write it well.

The flirtyness turning into a fight was very believable and something I could see happening. Which kind of sucks a bit, but hey, it happens. And they got over it :D