FIC: Good A-brewing (2/3)

[mrstater]

Title: Good A-brewing (2/3)
Author: MrsTater
Rating: PG
Pairing/Featured Characters: Remus Lupin/Nymphadora Tonks; Sirius Black, Severus Snape
Summary: Thirteenth in the Transfigured Hearts series: Remus could only imagine how Tonks would react if she knew the potion he could afford was not, by any stretch, perfect.

Comments

[drumher]

One of these days I'll be able to give you some concrit but all I can really manage this morning is that I thoroughly enjoyed this part and look forward to the last one. I love your Remus and Tonks. You have taken the little bits that JKR has given us and fleshed them out into real people.

[mrstater]

Thank you! I'm so pleased this feels like a realistic filling in of the blanks. I really enjoy writing for Remus and Tonks and am so glad others enjoy my work. Hope you like the conclusion. :)

[thekatebeyond]

Oh, this chapter is ten kinds of sweet and lovely! I can't wait to read more!

[mrstater]

Aw, thank you so much! There's more sweetness tomorrow. ;)

[kayleelupin]

Yay for sweetness, I love it! *hugs the fic* *goes off to read more*

~Kaylee Lily Andromeda Tonks-Lupin!!

[mrstater]

Thanks!

[isis_uf]

This is just so great. Fantastic characterization and description. I can picture Sirius sulking like a five-year-old in a forty-year-old's body. And, the description of Tonks as she came back downstairs was vivid as well. Very nice.

I really, really loved these lines - "I don't think Scrimgeour will accept snogging as an excuse for not handing in my paperwork."..."Perhaps if you told him your werewolf ate it?"

Inspired! They really made me laugh. Looking forward to reading the next part!

[mrstater]

Thank you very much for your feedback! Sirius frankly frightens me to death when it comes to capturing him on paper (or word processor), so I'm really pleased you think I've captured him.

And I'm so happy "your werewolf ate it" made you laugh.

Again, I appreciate your lovely comments, and I hope you like the conclusion tomorrow.