Fic: "The Proof Is In Your Moves" (girl!Frank/Jamia, 5430 words, NC-17)

[mrsronweasley]

Title: "The Proof Is In Your Moves"
Fandom: MCR
Warning/Rating: No redeeming qualities/NC-17
Word Count: ~5430 words
Summary: Jamia decides to strip for Frankie. That's it. That's the entire plot. (High school, always a girl!Frank AU)
Notes: With huge thanks to brooklinegirl who beta’ed this at lightning speed, and also egged me on. This was started a VERY long

Comments

[mrsronweasley]

Yaaaaaaaaaay, thank you! :D

[ciel_vert]

Nommmmmmmmmmmm girl!porn. And girl!Frank nrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh. Well done bb! <33333

[mrsronweasley]

Thank you, bb! NOT ENOUGH GIRLPORN IN THE WORLD. <33333

[swiiftly]

LIZ LIZ OH MY GOD.

OH MY GOD.

I. JUST. AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

THIS IS PERFECT IN SO MANY MANY GLORIOUS WAYS AND I WILL TELL YOU THEM IN GREAT DETAIL WHEN MY FUCKING POWER COMES BACK

AHHHHHHDFFUBISUDUVFAGXJVOISYFK *___________<3

ILU ILU ILUUUUUUUUUU

[mrsronweasley]

YAY YAY YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY, OMG, I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKED IT, HONEY! AND SO PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASED! Thank you for letting me play! <3333333333333333333

ILU BAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!

[swiiftly]

I am about halfway through writing up my DETAILED COMMENTS. I HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGS just you wait o______o

[amazonziti]

Oh my GOD.

I... do not have words at all. Like, brain is not functioning. This was just -- I kept reading too fast because it was SO FUCKING GOOD and then I'd have to skip back and reread a paragraph or three because I got ~overexcited. HOW DID I NOT REALIZE MY LIFE WAS EMPTY WITHOUT GIRL!FRANK/JAMIA. HOW.

I love how girl!Frank is the exact same obnoxious hotass as guy!Frank and how Jamia is totally hot and a total failboat at the same time. BEST STRIPTEASE. Literal stripper heels. GARTER BELT. Frankie jerking off (jilling?) while Jamia strips is just. Like. This will sound ridiculous, but it just NEVER OCCURRED TO ME, after all the porn I've read of guys jerking off while they watch someone strip, that HELLO GIRLS COULD DO THAT TOO. Frankie jerking off = hottest jerking off.

Ugh and they're both so playful and so turned on and the DESPERATION is so hot, and the collapse into sheer ridiculousness at the end is PERFECT. A+, you, I hope you feel TERRIFIC about your life and your choices.

[mrsronweasley]

Oh man, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS COMMENT. (Seriously, NEEDS MOAR GIRL!FRANK/JAMIA, RIGHT? RIGHT??)

I'm so so SO glad that Frankie came across exactly the same as dude Frank. And that Jamia worked here. I just. Had a lot of fun writing them.

after all the porn I've read of guys jerking off while they watch someone strip, that HELLO GIRLS COULD DO THAT TOO. Frankie jerking off = hottest jerking off.

\o/\o/\o/! Right? Seriously, I hadn't even planned it that way, but suddenly, I was, like, DUH, of COURSE she'd do that. Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!

THANK YOU, HONEY!

[romanticalgirl]

Hotness. Ngh. And I love this line: no words, just vowels skittering across the air as she came

[mrsronweasley]

Awww, yay, thank you! I was pretty pleased when that line happened. :D