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mrcrybrilliance

Sailor Moon Monthly Fanfiction Challenge - Day 23

Jan 26, 2009 23:03

Ami laughed as they entered his apartment. She was not drunk, but she was definitely feeling high, not on drugs - but on life itself.

The day had been perfect.

The girls had taken her shopping, and she had narrowly missed being ambushed in the lingerie shop. She had not succeeded in escaping some clothing that she was not sure she would ( Read more... )

sm_monthly, ami/zoi

Comments 4

lovelylytton January 27 2009, 07:54:04 UTC

Aww, you write the two of them so well. I am very fond of the girls' time you included. The nickname 'Nymph' is also cute and original on top of that. Well done!

mrcrybrilliance January 27 2009, 15:09:52 UTC

Thank you! They're obviously my favorite pairing. That's the nickname I use for Ami in my larger - and currently put on hold for the sm_monthly writings - fictions.

I struggled with this one at first because according to my mental map of the "year" it was September (obviously).

araya_rose January 27 2009, 19:50:53 UTC

Adorable. :) I'm not a huge Ami fan but I am addicted to the way you write her.

mrcrybrilliance January 27 2009, 20:16:53 UTC

Thank you! That's an awesome compliment.