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[mrbloober]

Alfred Stork clutched his chest, hacked a few raspy breaths, and collapsed to his death

Comments

[caitlinface]

this is my favorite story of your's so far.

[mr_dongato]

Good story kalen, especialy the begining. The concept of an orientation for the afterlife is amusing. It reminds me of Beatlejuice, and also in a way your story from screen writing. I guess mostly in terms of death and everyday life being combined in creative ways.