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[mr_lysdexic]

uncontrolled thoughts in slideshow time
just sitting there with a visual mind
I can smell what happens before it does
see thru the perspective of small blue bugs
dont worry mom im not on drugs..........
you see, i found this toad,
and I call him ted,
with just one lick to the back of his head....
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..........sure dude, your a piece of bread