Nandi the Savage #3

[mr_esty]

Comments

[jasonturner]

I love how you have all these different friends and helpers for Nandi, and you convey her affection for the pterodactyl here. That space on page 4 is super too.
The one thing I am having a bit of trouble figuring out are the last panels on page 5 and 6. I mean, I can suss out what's happened, but the actual contents of the panels are a little fuzzy for me.

[mr_esty]

3/4 up-shot at the hole in the roof. The intention was to set-up where Nandi was going... but I guess it IS kinda vague.

Thanks for commenting, Jason; it means a lot.

[jasonturner]

Ohhh, I see it now. I think the column thing doesn't read quite as clearly in those panels.

I am just so excited to see new stuff from you!

[mr_esty]

erf... the column thing is supposed to be giant plant, but I guess it doesn't "read" very clearly. I'll work on that.

[jasonturner]

I was interpreting it as some kind of exotic cave formation (which now that I think about it doesn't make any sense, as it is a built space and the hole goes outside).

[mr_esty]

It's always good to get a fresh set of eye-balls on a drawing.
I really appreciate this feedback, Jason.
(thanks!)