FIC; The Universe Encompasses and Swallows Me Up Like an Atom

Jul 09, 2012 19:01

title: the universe encompasses and swallows me up like an atom
author: mozarts-piano
pairings: louis/harry (mentions of liam/zayn, niall/ofc, matt cardle/aiden grimshaw)
word count: 5,000
rating: Mature
warnings: swearing, sexual activities (not too graphic), a very low knowledge of space and planets
summary: harry and louis go on an intergalactic road trip ( Read more... )

louis/harry, fic

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amorinventado July 10 2012, 07:20:26 UTC
OMFG THIS KSDLAJDLKAJDIOJEWRJKLSJFSKLAJFLKSDJF I CAN'T.
I'm anon!OP and I've basically created this account just so I could comment here. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW, YOU HAVE NO IDEA, I'm so, so grateful someone's taken up my prompt, especially when you've made such a beautiful job. You've created a fantastic 'verse, it's so much more than I ever hoped for. It's just the right amount of cute, sweet and hot, also, the fact that you've included the whole band + ed + matt and aiden makes it all the more awesome. I'd like to quote this bit from the beginning: " "we love each other right?" "always." "so we'll never get lost" " SO. ADORABLE. That's all I'm gonna quote, though, becuase the best thing about your writing aren't the words, but the images you build with it. I love it that I can picture their little asteroid and their garden and the food and the stars perfectly. My favorite one was, predictably, the ending, because the picture of those two standing under the umbrella with the diamonds falling all around them while they just stare at each other and breathe each other in is too much for me :')
A million "thank you"s and all the internet cookies/cupcakes/tasty stuff aren't enough <3

P.S.: If you ever write anything for this 'verse again, would you please let me know? Thank you!

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mozarts_piano July 10 2012, 12:17:54 UTC
I am SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT AHHH thank you so much for the lovely words, honestly, i think i could fry an egg on my cheeks, they're that blushy :)

I adore you just for putting in that prompt, so honestly thanks and awwww, quoting me back, that's so nice :)
I actually have made it almost mandatory to have matt&aiden mentioned in like, everything i write now because i love them that much :D they're precious.

I'm so happy you liked the diamond rain bit, I was a bit nervous at that bit! because it was the original prompt and by the time i got to writing it, i'd been writing for like, 3 hours straight and i was like "no, we can do this, come on brain" so yes, i'm glad you liked it :)

thankyouthankyouthankyou *eats cupcake* thankyouthankyou, thank you for the kind words!!

[unlikely that i will write anything more, but if i do, i will be sure to let you know (oooh like a how they met (no stop i have enough to write brain, haaha))]

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