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Is That Pink Mist (Or Just Dry Lit Ice)

Mar 19, 2010 14:59

Title: Is That Pink Mist (Or Just Dry Lit Ice)
Author: didzease
Rating: PG-13/soft R
A/N: For the kinkme_merlin prompt “Arthur/Merlin, the Twist by Frightened Rabbit”. Original fill can be found here. The song's linked here and this is the song at the end.

( Is That Pink Mist (Or Just Dry Lit Ice) )

g: slash fiction, c: drama, fandom: merlin, p: arthur/merlin, r: r, c: unreqruited, c: descriptive, r: pg-13

Comments 13

gogo_didi March 19 2010, 14:12:58 UTC

OP here again, outside of anonymity, to tell you how much I love this and how happy I am that you did it! :-)

didzease March 19 2010, 14:13:46 UTC

Haha, awesome <3 I'm glad you like it! I wanted to make it more angsty but, alas, I failed.

shiny4love March 19 2010, 20:04:06 UTC

Christ more angsty NO it brought me to tears as it is.

It could be read in so many ways that I'm still not sure what it's saying, just that it bloody heartbreaking. These boys really need to talk :(

Beautiful.

didzease March 19 2010, 20:08:39 UTC

Aw, sorry *hugs*

I don't know either :( And boys are emotionally constipated and never seem to want to talk *sigh* (I mean, they need to talk more in the series as well ¬¬)

I'm glad you liked it <3

dayari March 20 2010, 09:09:53 UTC

Oh, I love what you did with this--you weaved the song perfectly into the story!! I was so thrilled when I saw the prompt and was hoping so, so much for someone to fill it, because I adore this song, and now you did! Thank you so much! <3 I really like the pacing of this--the slow transformation from Arthur just 'using' Merlin and pretending that he's someone else, to finally having his feelings settle on Merlin and no one else. Seriously, what a lovely read! Thank you, again! ♥

didzease March 24 2010, 09:42:09 UTC

^^ I'm glad you thought I did the prompt justice! Thank you for your comment :)

lusimeles March 24 2010, 04:27:20 UTC

this is amazing - i have been listening to this song on repeat for the past week (and am actually listening to it now) so when i came across this, i was like OMG. but you did so much justice to the song, and ugh, this is just twists (haha) my heart like crazy - there's so much loneliness and desire and pain.

didzease March 24 2010, 09:37:43 UTC

Love the pun ;)

I'm glad you like it <3 And the song is pretty omg on itself! I hadn't heard it before I started writing but, OH YES I LOVE IT NOW.

Thanks for your comment <3

verasteine March 24 2010, 18:25:47 UTC

Holy, I was just on the kink meme and saw this and then saw it was you! Awesome stuff, this, heartbreaking, but really well written!

didzease March 24 2010, 18:46:39 UTC

Gotta participate in the fandom, aye?! And I'm glad you like it, it means a lot to get a comment from a fellow Dutchie ;)