OOh that ending made me cry! Yay - the found Jeff!! There was just so much goodness packed into this chapter, I can see why it was giving you such a hard time :) I am happy that everyone was able to move close to Jared and his family. definitely would help that Jensen is rich and knows people, lol!! Loved Jensen being so sweet and attentive when Jared was recovering and still hurting. I will admit, I had been kinda hoping that Jared would get an infection or something, LOL! but can see why you wanted to move things along more quickly then something like that would have.
Paige is a sweetie and I love how the boys were with her. And I loved that Jared did get some presents for himself and not just all for the baby :P Sometimes the parent gets forgotten in the excitment of a new baby. That happened to me when my birthday came two days before my daughter. All my presents were baby stuff! LOL!
A truly awesome chapter and very much worth the wait!
Aww I'm sorry I made you cry! But so happy you loved it hun. I had always planned on bringing Jeff into the fic. Didn't think it would be right not to after all the mention of him in previous chapters. And I honestly almost did give Jared an infection or something, but figured I had enough drama and angst. Don't worry though...my big bang fic is going to be mpreg with lots of hurt/comfort and schmoop as well.
I'm happy you liked the way I wrote Paige and all :). I'm an only child and have not had any children of my own yet. So I'm not super experienced with babies. Most of my experiences with kids are when they are toddlers and older lol. So I was a little worried I would mess up with this.
Thank you again sweetie! Hopefully won't take as long with the next and last one!
LOL! There is never enough angst and drama when it comes to a JIP (Jared-in-Peril) LOL!!!! I can't wait for your big bang then :)
Happy writing!
I have three girls and found Paige reminded me of mine when they were little. Ironically enough, statistically, baby girls are stronger then baby boys at birth so I wasn't surprised that she was a fighter (or bigger than the boys, even if there two of them).
I didn't realize that about girls lol. I was a preemie as well, but not by that many weeks. But I am happy that my little Paige reminded you are your own :). I was worried going ing since I don't know a ton about babies and everything. Being just 22 and an only child will do that haha.
Thank you again hun!! Your comments always make me smile!
This was so sweet and satisfying. We may have waited but there's so much story to take in. Wonderful. There was just one piece where I think you have typos "allowed to life up on anything just yet" Looking forward to the last chapter but not looking forward to seeing it end.
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Paige is a sweetie and I love how the boys were with her. And I loved that Jared did get some presents for himself and not just all for the baby :P Sometimes the parent gets forgotten in the excitment of a new baby. That happened to me when my birthday came two days before my daughter. All my presents were baby stuff! LOL!
A truly awesome chapter and very much worth the wait!
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I'm happy you liked the way I wrote Paige and all :). I'm an only child and have not had any children of my own yet. So I'm not super experienced with babies. Most of my experiences with kids are when they are toddlers and older lol. So I was a little worried I would mess up with this.
Thank you again sweetie! Hopefully won't take as long with the next and last one!
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Happy writing!
I have three girls and found Paige reminded me of mine when they were little. Ironically enough, statistically, baby girls are stronger then baby boys at birth so I wasn't surprised that she was a fighter (or bigger than the boys, even if there two of them).
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I didn't realize that about girls lol. I was a preemie as well, but not by that many weeks. But I am happy that my little Paige reminded you are your own :). I was worried going ing since I don't know a ton about babies and everything. Being just 22 and an only child will do that haha.
Thank you again hun!! Your comments always make me smile!
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