[Fic:] The police archives - part 3

[mouter]

            

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Re: Spot for Hugging Monster-chan

[karilly]

*drag you out of your hide-out* You have no reason to say sorry. I actually really like how the plot is going. It's really interesting and I'm looking forward to see how you'll unfold this. Kazuya being the heir as a mafia boss and Jin back on track as a detective... and knowing how much Jin loves Kazuya already I really wonder if he'll be able to arrest or be up against him.

Okay I started with the end because it left an impact and I'm curious and also Piiiii appeared but I shouldn't forget about the first part. I loved Kazuya’s struggling thoughts at the beginning. He was mad because of the handcuffs but at the same time couldn’t stay too mad at Jin. I liked how you developed Kazuya’s thoughts. And the comparison with Jin and a puppy is just too cute ♥

I felt sad for Jin though... I'm happy he got his detective job back but he's really lonely ne~! And just when he got someone to heal his loneliness it's getting complicated... and worst he had to go against that someone. On the other hand we have poor Kazuya who wants to forget about this past but it just pursuing him.

See, it's very interesting~ Kari enjoyed this part a lot and will wait patiently for more~ Thank you ♥

Re: Spot for Hugging Monster-chan

[mouter]

Yay that's great! *hugs* Actually I didn't plan this to the end... I wanted finished this part but they did me surprise and they somehow living on their own now. *sigh* Anyway Jin is too lonely. He should do something with his life ^^ I'm glad really glad you like it :D And yeah Pi, but I actually don't know what he will do here...