fic, HnG, Up and Go

[mousapelli]

Title: (All You Do Is) Up and Go [Shindou/Touya]
Rating/Warnings: PG for the dent in the fifth stall.
Summary: Shindou always comes back.
AN: For Go-Go day! I'm really not sure why I can't write HnG that isn't sad lately. marksykins must be using that half of the brain.

Comments

[harumi]

This is sweet and melancholy. Why does this make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside? I don't get it. ^^;;; But it does. It's so deliciously wonderful. Thank you!

[daisy_chan]

I love your icon. >>XD

[mousapelli]

Yeah, I'm not sure why I keep writing such melancholy HnG fic. Oh Hikaru, the things you do to me.

[zoesque]

"We aren't just Go, Hikaru,"

Wait, what does Touya know that we don't? XD

Seriously, this is awesome. It took me about as long as Touya to get why Hikaru was so upset, which is a testament to your fantastic writing. Hikaru just breaks my heart, and yeah, this was sad!fic, but somehow, you get the feeling that they're going to be fine. Not perfect, but just fine.

Thanks for sharing!

[mousapelli]

haha, poor Touya never quite gets Shindou right away. Thank you so much! I keep writing them sad, and I'm not exactly sure why. Maybe I should try harder for porn.

Hikaru always breaks me heart.

[chaineddove]

Sweet and melancholy, but wonderful as all your work always is. I don't know if this is my first time to speak up about it, but I follow your writing in several fandoms almost religiously *lol* Reload your fanfiction page occasionally hoping that there's something new, and so on. So, I am really happy to read something new! Great job ^_^.

[mousapelli]

haha, well, it should be all updated at this point, so explore away. That'll last three seconds.

thank you! I'm glad you liked it

[firedraygon97]

"Hm?" Shindou asks, reaching over and tucking Touya's hair behind his ear, which really just irritates him even more.

I love all the little details you add in this fic. ♥ Touya realizing that he's put his foot in his mouth is great. Awesome work with this.

[mousapelli]

hee, thanks! Poor Touya, he never has any idea what's going on.

[obsessive24]

Beautifully written. I really loved it, especially the end scene with the ticket stubs.

[mousapelli]

thank you! It's sort of strange to write in a fandom where one of the main characters essentially knows nothing that happened for most of the series. Poor Touya.