Fic, Hikaru no Go, A Better Person

Jul 21, 2005 19:15

Title: A Better Person [Shindou/Touya ( Read more... )

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sangoire July 22 2005, 01:00:04 UTC
Hahaha! V. cute ending, and yeah, Isumi is beyond question a better person than most. Do you mean Kurata in the first sentence, though? I was a little confused.

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mousapelli July 22 2005, 01:04:31 UTC
yeah, i do mean him, somebody just corrected me over on hikarunogo. there's always some sort of drama when i post over there. thanks for the catch. *fixes*

Isumi is certainly a better person than I am, but i can't begrudge Waya his chance to make crazy-haired babies with the pretty sensei's daughter either.

thanks! glad you liked it.

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svz_insanity July 22 2005, 01:29:26 UTC
I'm in love with your Hikaru no Go fics. They're gorgeous and you portray Akira so well! The dialogue wonderful-- *snickers* They seem so real. Ah, I feel sorry for Isumi though. He's such a nice guy.

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mousapelli July 22 2005, 03:29:41 UTC
aw, thanks! I just love Akira so much, i love his high-strungness and his complete bewilderment at Shindou shaking his life all up, but even hotter is Touya when he's adjusted to the situation and can play Shindou just as easily.

I'm glad you liked it! I've been enjoying your ficlets the last few days too.

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hooli July 22 2005, 01:38:25 UTC
Shindou's mother merely called that dinner would be ready in ten minutes and did not actually come into the room

(There was something about that sentence that tugged at me, so. XD)

Thank you so much for writing this ;) nothing like a good dose of my fav Go boys when I'm avoiding my class readings. <3333333

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mousapelli July 22 2005, 03:32:32 UTC
aha, missed that one, thanks.

*g* i love these boys to death, and once in a while i can't help but right weird little bits about them.

glad you enjoyed!

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ramble_corner July 22 2005, 01:44:19 UTC
i can't believe i forget to comment XDXD. LoL somebody mentioned about Kurata already , i see
"Ow!" Shindou snapped, struggling. "Touya, you freak, there are stones stuck in my…huuuunh,"
*gui drag mind out of gutter XDXD

A lovely Hikago fic. thanks for sharing it ^___^

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mousapelli July 22 2005, 03:33:27 UTC
haha, i liked that stones comment as well. thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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biggersandwich July 22 2005, 01:48:14 UTC
The thing with the signature is great and I love the way your fics are kind of serious underneath but still hysterically funny (you have the best lines ever <3 <3).

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mousapelli July 22 2005, 03:41:11 UTC
that's the best praise, because that's exactly what i'm going for. it's true that the deeper issues here are kind of serious and downers, and Waya and Isumi are going to marry girls and Touya is right to panic about people catching them.

But honestly, these boys understand each other so well, and if Shindou has shown them anything, it's that blowing off some steam is all to the good.

and also, i have a hard time keeping anything completely serious, especially with people so ripe for hilarity.

thanks so much! i'm glad you liked it!

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