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melibu7 February 12 2011, 06:19:56 UTC
as usual i enjoy the stanza :) can't wait to read more :) btw, what is the meaning of stanza? or did you explain and i missed it?

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mountainmadman February 13 2011, 05:45:38 UTC
Put simply, a stanza is a part of a poem or a lyric to a song. For example, a long poem may be divided up into a couple of stanzas.

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faisazali February 12 2011, 06:21:09 UTC
hero is coming to save the day!!!
first skinship...hoot~~~~
(although indirectly..who cares...kekeke)

i've fallen really deep for your story now..
it really shows that you are an amazing writer..
i should have said this from the first stanza you wrote..
your story really has that vibe of professional work..
the story full of knowledge and the plot really make the readers to anticipate more..

thank you so much for the story..
now, i really have to build my patient to read your next update..
thanks, chinggu!!!

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mountainmadman February 13 2011, 05:46:38 UTC
Thank you for your comment, I'll make sure to not let you down. :)

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rsmchirps February 12 2011, 06:58:00 UTC
Nice start to the story. I can see this one will be epic just like the last one. I like that they've already had so much interaction. And I like that the setup shows promise for all kinds of hi-jinks! Thanks and looking forward to more.

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mountainmadman February 13 2011, 05:46:56 UTC
Hi-jinks! Haha, love that word. Thanks for reading.

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lingzw87 February 12 2011, 06:59:58 UTC
hihi

i love this... you are an amazing writer... i hope i could be like you...

so well developed... i am so anticipating this...

thanks!!

ling

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mountainmadman February 13 2011, 05:47:17 UTC
Thank you! Also anticipating reading your new story, as well. :)

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babypillow February 12 2011, 07:30:49 UTC
thanks for the long chapter .... it's quite interesting to see how the relationship will progress as one is a noble lady and the other a traveling musician! if u put it in today's context, it is similar in a way!

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mountainmadman February 13 2011, 05:47:45 UTC
You're quite right, I haven't thought of that. Indeed very similar. Thanks for reading.

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