Broken Glass - Mirror - Part 1/15

[motsureru]

Author: motsureru

Title: Broken Glass: Part One - Mirror

Rating: PG-13 for serious matter? Will lead up to NC-17 in due time.

Spoilers/Summary: Everything. A continuation after Season 1, Sylar/Mohinder-centric
Word Count: 3,323

Teaser: There was Sylar, sprawled out in the form of everything he had poured his life into for the past six months. His

Comments

[thinwhite_duke]

A-freakin'-mazing!! You have a gorgeous writing style, and the ending, with the hospital calling Mohinder as Sylar's emergency contact! XD I love it... I would love to see more of it!

I really need to start sleeping more so I can possess enough focus to work on my own fics... :/

[motsureru]

Thank you for the compliments! I actually haven't written anything but original work for a while, so trying to get into the feel of something that's not my universe had me stressing out for a long while... I really wanted to get down to realistic details. ^^ I'm glad you liked it!

[cerebel]

This is great setup. You did a good job dealing with the legal aftermath of everything that went down in Kirby Plaza, and Mohinder's emotional confusion of having to take care of Molly and not really having a clue how to do so.

And now I really want to see what he does about Sylar...

[motsureru]

After watching the final episode a couple times I really sat there and said- "Wait... the police are just going to let them walk away?" xD Too much SVU made me say 'no way in hell'. But trying to write in-character really had me reeling for a bit (thus my longing for a beta from the comm). Thanks for reading!

[kael_raye]

This is interesting, you've really handle the little details nicely. I can't wait to read more.

[motsureru]

Thanks so much! The next part is already done, actually, just not edited to satisfaction. :] You may see it soon~

[flo_nelja]

I really, really love the idea of having the hospital call Mohinder in these circumstances !

[motsureru]

Thanks! I tried to take things as realistically as possible... obviously Sylar wasn't going anywhere anytime soon with a stab wound like that on hand. ^_~ Thanks for reading!

[sixth_light]

I really enjoyed this - you've got a good handle on Mohinder's voice, and there just isn't enough Mylar fic out there that deals with the actual ramifications of canon. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

And if you're still looking for a beta, I'd be willing to volunteer. I don't have a heap of experience on the beta side, but I've done quite a bit of writing, though mostly in other fandoms. Seems like a good way to get more involved in this one!

[motsureru]

Eee! A beta! *hugs* I would love for you to beta my stuff as I write it. I have one beta already- a best friend who's done original work with me for years- so I aspired to have one out of comm beta and one in comm beta to get the two perspectives. ^_^

My AIM sn is "Remy Dollneaz" and I'm always online- even if I'm away there's a good chance I'm sitting there at the desk. :P If there's another way to be in contact you prefer please let me know. ^^