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Jul 30, 2009 14:26

DSRK fan fiction. I wrote Gouto a story because if you think about it DSRK sort of is Gouto's story. Totally work safe because I am a loser. HOW DID I WRITING FIRST PERSON????? A grave transgression. Will try to do better next time sob sobsob

Mondo loves to canis_m for proofreading this masterpiece and for flipping out over the word "must" and for ( Read more... )

easy jazz, mfy it's gouto, a fanfiction!, dsrk

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motorbike July 31 2009, 16:43:52 UTC
Thank you;;;;; Gosh. I am really glad you liked it! ♥ I am like a python on a heating stone. I lie there dormant and quietly digesting until I poop out fan fictions

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motorbike July 31 2009, 21:56:56 UTC
My new favorite thing is genderswitched fat gouto with kittuns. Why so wrong and so cute ahhhh

BIG CAT LITTLE CAT SO CUTE AHHHH AHHHH oh Japan you have the best pet videos they are precious to the max

Speaking of vids have you seen the cat yodeling one I posted for K. Comedy goldddd

I am starting another fic right now, fffff etc, though no promises on the porn front yet. Porn front is moving in, however, and will precipitate soon enough I am sure. I really want to write some porno for you guyssss &heart;

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jongun78 July 31 2009, 09:44:44 UTC
well-fed tabby, all swagger

for someone who's allergic to cats, you know them pretty well.

First person was done really well and methinks, best suited to your writing style, seems to flow better.

Keep up the good work, toots! :)

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motorbike July 31 2009, 16:53:23 UTC
I know feral cats who claw their way into my house and ruin my window screens because they think I have food :D :D :D SO CUTE AMIRITE no

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jongun78 July 31 2009, 20:06:20 UTC
hehe...

yes yes, feral cats do have the most fun :)

I remember my best friends grandma used to feed the head-honcho alley cat of her neighborhood, he was about 20 lbs., and he would bring her dead rats

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motorbike July 31 2009, 21:52:39 UTC
YES these are the cats I know. They are scrappers and they are very territorial and they secretly love to cuddle ♥

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ficcentricity July 31 2009, 15:27:30 UTC
Your writing is so beautiful, the narration and mood is perfect for the time period + setting! I usually have trouble getting into first person POV but this flowed very smoothly. Gouto.♥♥♥

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motorbike July 31 2009, 16:40:33 UTC
I HATE FP POV LOLOLOL

I actually had this moment recently where I ranted for a good 20 minutes about how I find first person fanfiction pretentious and unreadable and why can't anybody use the perfectly serviceable third person limited when they do fics grr sheesh

And then I did this. The tables, they have turned

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flyby311 July 31 2009, 18:14:48 UTC
Oh god, make whoopee? HAHA. This was awesome. I love Gouto's POV; you got him and this fic was fabulous.

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motorbike July 31 2009, 18:20:17 UTC
Thank you! I promise I will attempt porno soon. Attempt. Atttttempttttttttttt ffff hysterics

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wren_chan July 31 2009, 20:36:30 UTC
Wow. I have no idea what the source is and I still enjoyed the heck out of this fic. Mostly because CAT OF AWESOME ♥

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motorbike July 31 2009, 21:51:47 UTC
The source material would be DSRK2, which is a video game! It is pretty much as gay as advertised above

THANK YOU ♥

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