Comments | mostnights: my first poem

mostnights

Jan 28, 2006 01:02

here is the first draft, tell me what you think ( Read more... )

Comments 5

kindof_blue January 28 2006, 19:08:46 UTC

I would not have known it's about pen and pencil. Perhaps a clue in the title?

mostnights January 28 2006, 19:20:06 UTC

yah, that's what i'll have to do... it's cheesy though, now that I've read it today

professorpink January 29 2006, 01:31:10 UTC

i don't think i would have known either, but i like it anyway. i don't think a person necessarily has to know.

newrhapsody January 30 2006, 22:23:21 UTC

clear-ish, but pretty nonetheless. subtle and good.
me gusta.
love love love. (and did you get an A on your quiz a long ways back?)

mostnights January 31 2006, 00:15:42 UTC

yah,i'm gonna try to make this junk more clear, but that's always for tomorrow.

thank you

i got a 75~! woo!