Fic: Compels Us Past Devils (The Mentalist, Jane/Cho)

[mosca]

Here's the first of the fics I wrote for Yuletide! This was my original assignment, written for Devera, who asked for Jane/Cho with a great prompt - Cho is the one annoying Jane, and Cho doesn't realize it. Cho's my favorite character on the show, and not just because he's my flavor of hot, so it was fun to figure out his voice and expand his

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[hurry_sundown]

Can I marry this fic, please?

It had been a long time since he'd been kissed by someone he loved ...

Oh, Cho.

Excellent voices, baybee.

[mosca]

You can totally marry this fic if you want to. But Cho is mine.

Thanks!

[heffermonkey]

Oh to see the insides of that notebook - because there must be reams of things that bother Jane about Cho - but all in the name of figuring the man out.

Lovely fic, really enjoyed and a great look at the Jane/Cho relationship

[mosca]

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed this.

[ebilchickens]

Beautifully done. I really like how you wrote Cho and Jane. Their voices and how you set up the situation was very true.

[ranger_girl0301]

Wonderful job! You gave us Cho/Jane lovers a bit of fun AND gave Kimball someone he can be happy with, all in one swoop!