Fic: This Is Awkward (AI/skating, Jeremy Abbott/Kris Allen)

May 25, 2010 16:24

I am not allowed back on LJ yet because my work is not done, but today is my posting day for holiday_on_ice. So here's the fic! Hope y'all are having fun and behaving yourselves ( Read more... )

fanfic, skating, american idol

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foxing May 25 2010, 21:09:39 UTC
Oh wow! Definitely liked this! So sweet and hot at the same time! (I think I'll just add in more exclamation marks because this was such a fun read) !!!

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mosca June 1 2010, 19:56:16 UTC
Thanks so much!!!

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mosca June 1 2010, 19:56:37 UTC
Hee! Glad you enjoyed. :)

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athenejen May 27 2010, 00:25:44 UTC
Charming and adorable and delightful! The giggling as Kris signed Jeremy's skin -- so very cute and in character. And you get the less cheerful and manic sides of Jeremy so right, too, his anxieties and melancholy moments and the sense of embarrassment that -- at least in Jeremy -- seems to be the essential, unavoidable flipside of all that the joy and sweetness and laughter.

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mosca June 1 2010, 19:57:28 UTC
Thanks so much!

Jeremy's semi-hidden angsty side fascinates me.

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andantecantible May 27 2010, 02:39:11 UTC
OMG. Seriously, this has made my day. No scratch that, this has made my week. I everyone in this (Meryl drinking with the Barenaked Ladies was priceless) and how Jeremy gets to be a rock star too. And yay for mentioning more than one Kris Allen song!

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mosca June 1 2010, 19:57:59 UTC
Yay! I am so, so glad you enjoyed this. I loved your prompts and was really excited to write for you!

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mandysbitch May 28 2010, 05:54:51 UTC
I read it again! I love this pairing! I love your Jeremy! There must be more Jeremy some time.

He is not looking into Jeremy's eyes. Did he just say stiff?

I remember you saying it was sort of difficult to get Jeremy's rambly thought processes right - but you nail it, right here! I love how that line gets that whole OMG OMG OMG! feeling SO WELL.

Anyway, great job on the ending too. Very nicely wrapped up.

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mosca June 1 2010, 19:59:21 UTC
Hee, yay! I love writing Jeremy. No doubt there will be more of him, even with that pesky canon boyfriend to write out of the picture.

Your comments were so helpful, too! You're awesome.

Just saw the femslash you posted earlier in the week - it's very high on my catching-up-with-fandom list.

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