Comments | mosca: Fic: Maybe Sprout Wings (Women's Murder Club, Lindsay/Jill)

mosca

Fic: Maybe Sprout Wings (Women's Murder Club, Lindsay/Jill)

Jun 23, 2008 21:14

Fic! I have no idea who is going to read this, but fic ( Read more... )

fanfic, women's murder club

Comments 19

callmesandy June 24 2008, 04:17:56 UTC

OKay, i really liked! i read and everything! :)

mosca June 25 2008, 01:43:52 UTC

Yay! I am so glad you read and liked!

biogeekgrrl June 24 2008, 05:10:02 UTC

Your dialog, as usual, is delightful.

mosca June 25 2008, 01:44:33 UTC

Aww, thanks. Much credit actually goes to my beta for that.

julietcetera June 25 2008, 02:50:14 UTC

so I don't follow figure skating, I don't watch this show, and yet now not only do I want you to write lots of jill/lindsay, I really want to see how many other fandoms you can cross skating into, because this was so good.

mosca June 25 2008, 14:32:19 UTC

Thank you so much!

I have already crossed skating into, let's see. The Buffyverse, Firefly, Project Runway, and WBRPF. And now I am wondering why the Muppets are not on that list.

WMC is an awesome show, and only 13 eps before they canceled it, so not a big commitment.

jule1122 June 25 2008, 23:03:49 UTC

I love this story. I may start refering to crazy people as fruitcakey.

Only with a penis. Jill likes penises. Lately, she is having to remind herself of this. Lately, the penises have been disappointing. Like all their owners have misplaced the manual.
I don't know if I told you how much I love this part. And then they way you come back to it later, really makes the story. It tells me everything I need to know without pages of Jill's inner thoughts.

Also having Andy easedrop on Jill's first phonecall to Lindsay was perfect, not only for late, but also for Andy's character.

I hope you write more of these two even if it takes time away from Johnny and Ben!

mosca June 26 2008, 15:24:37 UTC

I am so glad you loved this. Your beta was fantastically helpful -- you really figured out where the construction and plotting problems were in the draft.

I have an idea for a sequel, kind of, but not enough time for writing ever!

e_holly July 8 2008, 04:24:56 UTC

I really liked it! I think it would be wonderful if you wrote more women's murder club, especially lindsay/jill! Nice work!

:)

mosca July 8 2008, 17:21:22 UTC

Thank you so much!

I really enjoyed writing in this fandom and will probably do it again. :)