In the Eyes of a Child - Part 5/9

[morthel]

Comments

[rebelbyrdie]

I love this story! Rose's discomfort with Sharon/Allysa reflects my own. That really sucked me in. I also like the details, the desrciption of the scenery. Spooky yet awesome.

Keep up the great work, I want to know what happens!

[morthel]

Thank you for the comment! I've tried to make the characters' reactions as plausible as I could, and I'm glad you seem to share my perception of them. I hope you'll like the rest as well!