Fic 1 is absolutely wonderful! Very vivid and erotic and alas, some very stupid, crack-headed part of me put this interpretation on it and tried to ruin it (roar)
It's alive, he wants you to feel. It breathes. It responds.
"Seiichi..."
"Did you feel him kick?"
"I want to name him Akaya."
Sorry XD;;
And Fic 2... Oh man. Dissolute Renji. *brain melts orgasmically*
AH! it's nice to have time to read fics again! *spins*
ahahahahahaha (falls to the floor laughing) wow, i never thought of that. "akaya" would be a good name for something springing unannounced out of the earth, yes XD XD
uwaaaaah, thanks for reading right away! WEEKENDS ARE GOD'S GIFT TO HUMANKIND <3 <3
I cannot comment coherently on the first one. how much they both want but how awkward they actually are. and yes. military hands. ♥
(Eda's comment kinda turned it around but didn't help coherency. 'name it Akaya' AHAHAHA)
the second one is SO jazz bar *drags you well into jazz band AU with welcoming cocktail* and felt so painful because Renji is the last person who would get drunk, chibi eps aside, and I'm not quite sure why he is upset, what 'old sins' he's referring to. waaah Renji T^T
"name it akaya" heeehehehe that's the only way i can read that part now XD XD am not changing anything there, i know some people would appreciate the crack :x
haaai, agree that renji IS the last person who would get drunk, but couldn't let the idea of him voluntarily killing brain cells slide. am still working out WHY he's upset (i have shadows, that's all he's showing) but i'll spill once i figure it out, i swear ^^
I think it's the whole jazz bar thing, easier access to alcohol. and you can't sing the blues until you've got a little bit of them in you, too. but I don't have enough blues (or, well, interesting blues :E) to understand why Renji might be upset, so looking forward to that :]
initially i thought it would be enough blues to have two members of the same band terminally attracted to each other ^^; but maybe we could drive this one deeper in. maybe raymond chandler can even give us some tips?
>P nah, we won't make it THAT angsty...gotta leave room for piano pr0n and all
*hands you a shot of bourbon* Welcome to jazz band, and my your stay be magical and musical and undoubtedly angsty.
Both drabbles were beautifully done, and like the people before me, I found myself wondering what Renji had done and what had happened...which means you need to tell me before the curiosity kills. *looks cute*
*tried to comment last night but Javascript is a dork*
The first one... <333 Ohhh, there's just something about that type of SanaYuki - when you can see they're so close yet so far away from each other - that is so sad yet intriguing. I'd love to see more like the second one; I'd especially like to know what Renji's "sins" are, as he says. Very interesting. <3
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It's alive, he wants you to feel. It breathes. It responds.
"Seiichi..."
"Did you feel him kick?"
"I want to name him Akaya."
Sorry XD;;
And Fic 2... Oh man. Dissolute Renji. *brain melts orgasmically*
AH! it's nice to have time to read fics again! *spins*
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uwaaaaah, thanks for reading right away! WEEKENDS ARE GOD'S GIFT TO HUMANKIND <3 <3
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(Eda's comment kinda turned it around but didn't help coherency. 'name it Akaya' AHAHAHA)
the second one is SO jazz bar *drags you well into jazz band AU with welcoming cocktail* and felt so painful because Renji is the last person who would get drunk, chibi eps aside, and I'm not quite sure why he is upset, what 'old sins' he's referring to. waaah Renji T^T
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haaai, agree that renji IS the last person who would get drunk, but couldn't let the idea of him voluntarily killing brain cells slide. am still working out WHY he's upset (i have shadows, that's all he's showing) but i'll spill once i figure it out, i swear ^^
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*anticipates*
I think it's the whole jazz bar thing, easier access to alcohol. and you can't sing the blues until you've got a little bit of them in you, too. but I don't have enough blues (or, well, interesting blues :E) to understand why Renji might be upset, so looking forward to that :]
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>P nah, we won't make it THAT angsty...gotta leave room for piano pr0n and all
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Both drabbles were beautifully done, and like the people before me, I found myself wondering what Renji had done and what had happened...which means you need to tell me before the curiosity kills. *looks cute*
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hee, will discuss jazzband!renji's psyche with you when next we meet on aim. i have a lot of fleshing out to do before then, too :3
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The first one... <333 Ohhh, there's just something about that type of SanaYuki - when you can see they're so close yet so far away from each other - that is so sad yet intriguing. I'd love to see more like the second one; I'd especially like to know what Renji's "sins" are, as he says. Very interesting. <3
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i'm glad you liked them both, esp. the sanayuki. :3
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