[FIC] "Steel Messiah" Intro, Cyberpunk AU, Gen, PG for language

[morphaileffect]

i am one of the worst people in the world to write cyberpunk PoT fic.

but lyntek gave me the motivation, idea, and everything else, while petronia gave me the extra kick

Comments

[lyntek]

EEEEEEEEEeeee It's my cyberpunk being written!!!!!!!EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

Despite the fact that I know what's going to happen, I will wibble and wibble as this is being written!!!! WAIWAIWAIWAIWAIWAI!!! DAMN I WANT THE NEXT PART NOW!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!

BOOYAH FOR THE STEEL MESSIAH!!!

[morphaileffect]

heheh, should not have posted this so early, it's raw and "wuh?!". will try to finish the next part soon so people can at least have a better idea what the hell i'm going on about ^^v

yes, your cyberpunk is being written! but i didn't promise you GOOD cyberpunk, okay??

the steel messiah luffs j00 <3 <3

[tongari]

I was going to say something intelligent about the genre, but I think the words 'Sanada' and 'cyberjock' pretty much broke my brain before I got there.

still, DUDE. cyberpunk AU. this genre scares me because of all the cliches I know I would fall into trying to write it. you are brave and I wave pom-poms. and THE ATOBE CORPORATION. DUDE. I need to stop saying dude.

I was about to ask if you'd read William Gibson, because he's about the only cyberpunk author I enjoy reading. but he is the granddaddy of the genre :) and his prose is so stark, bare and beautiful, all facts and patterns and very little pure emotion. which is biased of me cause I like that style, but yeah. highly recommend :)

[morphaileffect]

courage is the only thing i have to wave in the world's face. talent, good taste and an actual brain are another matter ;P

have -count zero- lined up after i finish with -mona lisa overdrive- (but have put reading projects on hold for the week, so am still frozen at the -restaurant at the end of the universe-, which i find myself craving badly). and still canNOT find -idoru- T_T

please educate me on this genre! am not the expert by a longshot. my stock knowledge really stops at gibson and sterling, and occasional wanderings into cyberpunk (PS, have started reading -perdido street station-, too, does mieville count?)

[lechaco]

haha when I saw the title, I thought about that Pierrot song. XDDD Yay for Pierrot fans *_* What else is on your angry!rikkai playlist? XD I have yet to compile one. My angst!rikkai playlist is the Witch Hunter Robin OST (last few songs) XD;; I had Allay Pain on repeat while trying to finish my angst fic. +_+;;;;

This is interesting so far and I adore Ray Bradbury. *_* Atobe Corporation...how fitting. XD I love the last line. I love it when people tie the story back to the title. >_<;;; <3

[morphaileffect]

etto, the playlist is constantly under development. occasionally i find a good hard song i like and slap it on, but it seldom sticks ^^ these are the staples ^_^

wah, have not listened to the witch hunter robin ost yet! and have only watched a few eps, courtesy of a good friend, but that looked like one seriously angsty set of bgms...

bradbury :x god, it's been years since i last touched anything from those old guys. i remember how much i wibbled over the martian chronicles, even if i can only remember ONE story from it now XD

[cirnelle]

Ooh, cyberpunk. ^^ What you've got so far sounds really interesting, and I can't wait to see where you go with this. Oh, and I liked the style you used here. <3

[morphaileffect]

i seriously need to rewrite it. perhaps after i've posted the first few parts...but am glad you liked! <3 the few cyberpunk books and stories that i've read have a distinct poetic style i can't quite grasp, not even when likkered up XD

[morinotokei]

I don't have a picture of where you'll be taking this yet, but I'm intrigued, and I really like the descriptions you used, particularly the moth and the snowflake. Looking forward to more of this. =)