Comments | morphaileffect: [FIC] "Deceit," NiouYuki, PG-13

morphaileffect

[FIC] "Deceit," NiouYuki, PG-13

Mar 06, 2004 20:10

yup, this was my bday gift to yuki. everyone else (including konomi-sensei YEAH!) is doing an excellent job with the SanaYuki, i won't be tainting the sweetness ;) i still want to comment left and right, though, so...nobody go away, okay?

( rushed crack that never made the deadline XP )

pot, yukimura, pot!fic, niouyuki, niou

Comments 10

cirnelle March 6 2004, 04:52:12 UTC

*__* You have completely slayed me with this. *wibbles helplessly over the Niouangst and Yukiangst and the SanaYuki and the NiouYuki eeeee~~~*

Look, you've reduced me to incoherence. ^.~;;

Close to his ear, those luscious lips whispered "Genichirou..."

::DEAD:: (But you probably already knew that ^_~;)

And loved the ending line. ♥

morphaileffect March 6 2004, 07:03:21 UTC

hee, thanks for reading! :D i had trouble thinking up an ending line, actually...i decided to keep this one, since you liked it ;)

tongari March 6 2004, 05:16:36 UTC

Niou sneaking into hospital and ravishing Yuki, AAAAAGH!!!
*flails and writhes on floor*

of course there had to be that twist to the end. AAAAAAGH!!

bad Yuki. and poor proud hedgehog going along with his beloved buchou's dream ;__; one more time: AAAAAAAAGH!!

morphaileffect March 6 2004, 07:03:58 UTC

(AAAAAAAAGH!!s with you) the hedgehog has angst, it kind of frightened me to realize XD

muzivitch March 6 2004, 05:22:34 UTC

Oh, poor, poor Niou! *feels sorry for him*

Hmm, you know...I bet Renji's good at comforting hurt "semes"...

Renji's been strange lately. Giving Niou *looks* and calculating exactly how to arrange to have Niou pinned against a locker.

morphaileffect March 6 2004, 07:04:34 UTC

:O i would LOVE to see renji punish this one. the chase will be exquisite. in a way they both strike me as probability nuts; renji uses statistics to predict what the opponent will do next, while niou just works by gut and common sense (makes me wonder what renji is doing playing shogi with sanada, of all people. for easy wins? or is sanada really that good?)

if renji wants to "comfort" niou up against a closed locker, he might have to overcome a hefty set of mind games first. i would dearly love to see the master win :x

supplanter March 6 2004, 05:30:03 UTC

....

Damnit, Yuki! XDDDD Oh, poor Niou.... ;_;

morphaileffect March 6 2004, 07:05:09 UTC

eheh, i gave up trying to figure it out XD and even if yuki was, he would never tell XD

thanks for reading :x

morinotokei March 8 2004, 08:40:09 UTC

*quietly screaming* Niou and Yukimura angst! ♥♥♥ I loved the contrast of the hospital visit during the day, and the one at night, especially because the former makes the latter even more heartbreaking. *cuddles Niou* Love Niou's very apparent adoration of Yukimura, and Yukimura's fondness for him, even if it wasn't exactly what he wanted. Eeeeee. I love these Rikkai boys so much. There are just endless possibilities of how they can interact with each other.

Um, sorry about the lateness of my comment. Making my way through flist backlog. >.>

morphaileffect March 10 2004, 11:47:52 UTC

There are just endless possibilities of how they can interact with each other.

oh god yes XD and the best part is, i'm not even sure konomi-sensei is aware that he's stumbled upon the ultimate mysteriously seductive group of characters(tm). there is so much more chemistry with the rikkai players than with a lot of the other teams, it's more fun to play in THEIR sandbox :x

am happy you liked! and don't worry, i go through long backlogs too. in fact i'm going through one right now XD am even grateful you took the time to comment :) :)