Comments | morphaileffect: [fic] At the Stars 15/?

morphaileffect

[fic] At the Stars 15/? | the somewhat PG-13 installment

May 23, 2011 03:54

i apologize in advance, this is very raw. should fix this later. extra-long installment, and still not the end!

in the meantime, if you're a Tiger & Bunny fan, have a highly improbable drabble.

unrelated: i think i might be in love with neil jordan.

( Why Touma had to be such a pervert, he did not know. )

fic, yst:fic

Comments 5

anonymous May 23 2011, 03:22:08 UTC

I literally cried seeing this new chapter appeared in my Reader. So long TT_TT !!!!!!!!!

Well, I have always been prepared for getting a sad ending, but not like this. I, somehow, vaguely think Ryo would sacrifice himself, but I expect that sacrifice from Seiji more. Like, somehow, he knows everything and decides to end his life... Like that. Argh, but all the more, I don't want anyone to die. But how can this end with no death, I wonder? Ah, I'm dying for the new chapter already!!!

Sorry for all the rambling, I'm not good at expressing myself T__T . I hope the new chap will come soon :)

PG 13? Crazy girl's dream comes into true! shine14 May 23 2011, 06:04:18 UTC

Yeah,but that's not the point. My eyes got wet when I saw the update as the anonymous said..Buddy, looks we all sit here all day refreshing the page for a new chapter...come here for a hug!

I'm trembling...cried several times during the reading. Touma finally got a day with Seiji, but it was so torturous! Poor Touma, why did you have to get yourself into all those? But I was a little angry when he was cautious about if Shin was there and reminded of Ryo's touch. I am angry! It seems as if he had something with Ryo. Okay, finally Seiji got everything straightened out. Why didn't start this earlier, Seiji? Though Ryo's life was at stake, I can't help wish nothing/nobody interrupt them. And I want to see more(grin)^_^

Poor Ryo! Don't let him die! After both Seiji and Shin were revived, could the four boys work together to bring him back? You know, as it always happened in the war. I hope that's it!

Thanks for the great work!

Here's quiet again... shine14 June 17 2011, 03:37:30 UTC

The chapter on ff is different from this. I love the old one. Sort of feel you are going to kill Seiji. Want a new chapter badly.

Re: Here's quiet again... morphaileffect June 23 2011, 18:33:38 UTC

yeahhh i kind of cut out a few sentences because i got scared of getting banned XD; unless you mean the chapter has completely different text from the one that's up here?? i will need to visit my ff.net uploads sometime to check, you see i just kind of... put them up there and vanish offline again.

i'm really sorry i'm taking so long. RL has been a total slavedriver. no new chapter this week either i'm afraid :( but the story is drawing to a close, and i'll post the next part as soon as i can!

Re: Here's quiet again... shine14 June 25 2011, 05:27:30 UTC

Really, you are going to end this story? I will miss you, and your story. Can I expect new stories?

So you deleted the lemon part for the sake of rating? I got it. No problem. Not a big deal. I was just curious, deeply attached to this story and became kind of oversensitive:)