[yst] [fic] At the Stars 5/?

May 21, 2010 18:05

taking a break after this. i haven't written anything long in ages and i had no idea it was going to suck up so much of my time and focus. RL wants me back yesterday.

...in which Seiji writes fanfic. )

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This is great!!! anonymous May 22 2010, 17:07:38 UTC
I really, really love this story! I bumped into it on FanFictione.net and was totally captured. I have not read any fanfiction as well written as this in ages. The way you capture the emotions... just fantastic! And, of course, I like the plot too. I'm really really really looking forward to the new chapter. Hope that your break isn't too long.

Please, do continue writing!

Liz (kaay on FanFiction :))

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anonymous May 22 2010, 19:30:13 UTC
Oh,please don't leave us here! Long time no good story pops up on ff.net. You definitely can't do this to your readers! Or you can update less frequently,OK?
Seiji is suffering, Rowen is so devoted and Ryo is helping and at no clue about his friends' relationships. Please go on!---by Yawen from ff.net

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anonymous May 23 2010, 07:33:57 UTC
I wonder if Seiji and Touma were a couple or they yet didn't know what they mean to each other or if there were any relationships between the two best friends at all. Ryo seems clueless, so at least he doesnt know.

Anyway, I love this Touma. what he was doingfor Seiji is great, even not every lover or family could do as good As him.

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anonymous May 23 2010, 13:05:30 UTC
Oh, it's quite clear to me that they're a couple. In chapter 1, there's a kissing scene in the end... They MUST be a couple!

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anonymous May 23 2010, 18:18:19 UTC
I thought as you, but after read the talk between Ryo and Touma in this chapter, I am not so sure.Ryo intuitively senses that Seiji is special to Touma and he heard the neighbor's gossip, but why Touma not like to admit?To me, he keeps sth about himself and Seiji from Ryo.

I just can't help wonder, thanks for your reply!

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