[fic] The Cat and His Boy (2/2) {8018, PG}

May 25, 2008 08:14

thanks for waiting! i am horrible with serials and i'm sorry if this is made of fail T_T

have uploaded the rain version of Yiruma's "When the Love Falls," for those who are interested. it's over here.

Part 1 is here.

He's not worth your time if a broken heart and a broken arm are enough to kill him. )

hibari, reborn!fic, khr, tsuna, yamamoto, 8018

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izkariote May 25 2008, 00:49:19 UTC
Before all else, I want to let you know that I was drinking water while checking my flist. I nearly spat it out because I spazzed when I saw this post.

*pauses to read it*

....aksdhf;klhsdagahgdakahg GUH WHY SO SAD. ;A;

and sry2say, but I have to point out that and the funny-looking kid with the SHITI'MGONNADIE expression made me laugh. A lot. CAPSLOCK TSUNA FOREVER.

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morphaileffect May 25 2008, 01:15:11 UTC
capslock!tsuna wins the universe XD XD if hibari were in the habit of laughing, tsuna would probably send him rotfling too. instant victory!

the sad ending? i have no defense. but see, maybe it isn't a dream. maybe hibari just thinks it's a dream, but yamamoto actually does open the window and let him in. falling asleep in the rain just has a tendency to warp your sense of reality like that...

or maybe it never happened and it's just as the MYSTERIOUS ANGST FACTOR implies!

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izkariote May 25 2008, 03:12:20 UTC
.... ;A;

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morphaileffect May 25 2008, 03:47:06 UTC
I HAVE NO SPACE FOR A DECENT "WAH" ICON, SO MUKURO WILL JUST WEEP BLOOD TEARS WITH YOU.

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a_lighter_side May 25 2008, 02:36:03 UTC
It's finally here and it's so beautiful, BBgun. It's sad but beautiful. It's not too angsty but it is sad as only HIbari can show it in his Hibari way. With Yamamoto 'moving on' it's such a release for him -- and it's true -- he's just glowing in the company of the 'family'...

Your writing tugs at my heartstrings *fangirls you* ♥

Just remember after the rain, if you sit in a place high enough...mist follows :O i just had to put that in, didn't i?

(LOVE) ...i don't know why im using a ryohei icon XD

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morphaileffect May 25 2008, 03:46:23 UTC
i'm glad it wasn't too angsty aggy-chu! the family really came through for yamamoto in canon i think, and i just had to work that into this fic, too.

*fangirls you back* remember, it was your request that prompted this ♥♥

hahah oh my, it would be so terrible if mist used cloud's memories of rain against him, just for kicks. and yet, mist is the sort who would do that out of love. scary (and yet sexy) thing, mist ^^

(i use my goku icon because my next project is ryohei x gokudera XD XD)

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a_lighter_side May 25 2008, 04:00:18 UTC

but it was what you made of the prompt that REALLY WINS! ♥

shgasdhgf O_______O my mind went haywire!

(i use my goku icon because my next project is ryohei x gokudera XD XD)

PLEASE :O hayachan x ryobun???? TOT!!

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morphaileffect May 25 2008, 04:07:51 UTC
PLEASE :O hayachan x ryobun???? TOT!!

YES.

...

yes?

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kyokou_kuroda May 25 2008, 09:35:04 UTC
I-I can die happy now 8'DDDD
But the ending \(TTATT\) Yamamotooooo~~~ How can you forgeeeeeeeeeet~~~~

And lol~ CATTLES 8D

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morphaileffect May 25 2008, 11:14:18 UTC
♥♥ for hanging on for the second part!

and get well soon, please T_T

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kyokou_kuroda May 26 2008, 07:14:48 UTC
THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT DEAR ♥ more love to you~~~

And I'm fine now ^w^ Thanks for the concern 8D

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celadonite May 25 2008, 17:54:07 UTC
8018 doesn't make much sense to me as a pairing, but you managed to make it work out well. Extra kudos for writing angst achingly beautiful and not melodramatic.

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morphaileffect May 26 2008, 02:45:03 UTC
my hibari muse would probably kill me if i brought on the heavy drama XD; many thanks for reading!

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fruru_devilette May 25 2008, 22:02:01 UTC
I commented before that I have always entertained the idea that they have known each other before... but to see it being written in such a way. This is everything I have imagined and so much more. It flows so nicely with the cannon timeline; every event incorporated in such a plausible manner. There is such a charm to your characterisation as well. It's so sad that they didn't end up together at the end of this fic, but it is not entirely hopeless as the ending suggests that there are posibilities for their relationship to develop in many ways in the future.

I hope you write more of this pairing. You fic is easily one of the best in the fandom in my opinion:D Keep up the good work!

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morphaileffect May 26 2008, 12:44:24 UTC
thank you so much for reading through to the conclusion. in general, i think i'm better with one-shots, so i was thinking maybe it was best to end this fic at the first part... but the challenge of tying everything up with canon just wouldn't leave me alone. now that i see that some readers liked it, i feel better about the decision to write the next part out :D

and i'm really honored that you think it's good. i hope to write more 8018 in the future, too! again, many thanks for reading ♥

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