Comments | morphaileffect: [Reborn fic] Chrome in Five 3/3

morphaileffect

[Reborn fic] Chrome in Five 3/3

Feb 24, 2008 15:00

( 4. Ken and Chikusa hated Chrome. They hated her the way angels hated the favored race of God, just before they acted on that hate and fell. )

reborn!fic, khr, kokuyou, mukuro, chrome

Comments 7

celadonite February 24 2008, 12:57:29 UTC

That was incredibly creepy. With the 'cute Chrome's, the silly samba dancing and pineapples, it's sometimes easy to forget just how dangerous Mukuro is. Poor Chrome :(.

morphaileffect February 24 2008, 13:46:01 UTC

the samba pineapples are so deceptive. cute chromes aside, i'm still pretty scared of mukuro, especially since his latest showdown with byakuran. there are times when he means business, and when that happens, it's difficult to take him lightly.

thank you for reading ♥

demanawaits February 24 2008, 17:51:16 UTC

This last part really draws back to the last scene of the first part: Mukuro is a greedy, greedy God.

T-this is really amazing. <33 Best characterization of Chrome I've read;; the religious allusions intensified the horror. It's easy for thirteen-year-old girls to say so-and-so is a God because they often forget God has a wrath too. God made heaven AND hell.

Thanks for sharing!

morphaileffect February 26 2008, 05:06:05 UTC

thanks for reading! ♥♥

shisukei February 27 2008, 18:07:48 UTC

Such an awesome work, i loved every part of it, chrome is sure an awesome character that needs more development

morphaileffect February 28 2008, 04:32:10 UTC

i'm glad you liked it. thank you for reading! and yes, she does - i do hope to come across more chrome character exploration fics.

scratchmist July 14 2010, 08:43:24 UTC

Poked around Google for good Mukuro/Ken/Chikusa fic. Found this instead, and thought it was genius. You wrote a very convincing Chrome, and I love the way you pieced together her history and her character in relation to Mukuro. Beautifully written. :D