FIC: Grand Slam [Jaejoong/Yoochun]

[mormorando]

grand slam
jaejoong/yoochun; 2,425
Hard R/NC17 for boys being boys (aka language and seeeex)
prompt 'attention' for in_vazn; mainly inspired by my dibusk beta (cmere - she likes attention, not being mysterious) during a Twins game adventure where she wanted jaechun/kiss cam fic. this is the result and the result is less poetically smutty than the jaesu porn,

Comments

[quiet_heartache]

spot! brb

[quiet_heartache]

XDDD funny smut? best kind!!

'"why did you buy that? you don't even like beer." "i don't like your face.") ' - made me lolllllllll

seriously amusing stuff, and so cute too, i love chunnie's not wanting to mess around-ness and joongie being awkward ^^

thankyuuu

[applesu]

!!!!!

ougad. must refrain from keysmashing. this is so awesome! i love how you write them - funny and stupid and pissy and then just really cute. jaejoong sipping his drink was A++, as was yoochun laughing to himself. and jaejoong's total fail at sports. i have a huge smile on my face! have a heart - ♥, you win!

[hay_linny]

*BIG BIG GRIN*

Jaejoong just holds his giant (ly overpriced) cup of coke with both hands and sips it sulkily.

"Are you sipping that? What are you, a girl?"

"Shut up."

oh but he is!! anyway, i loved this sooo much. The two of them are so witty and amusing, it hurts. And awkward man-friend sex? yuspls XD Really really enjoyed this, thank u!

[314159]

SDLKAJDLKSJ I usually hate Jaechun but this was so great and I loved the snark and I am totally memming this ♥

[tokyoemergency]

"Yoochun, why the fuck is my fucking face with yours on the fucking screen in the middle of a fucking ugly heart."

I LOVE THIS.
(and that's all i can say without typing in gibberish)