Very nice! I very much appreciate that Derek *needed* to go back home and make some good memories there. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with Reid, and how these two come together. I really, really appreciate that you're taking your time and dealing with emotional issues. And I like how you've captured the characters speech patterns. A lovely, lovely read and I hope the 1/5 means that the story is completed?
I'm really liking this so far and can't wait to read the rest. I just wanted to point out There are a few boys you’ll be in later this afternoon--I think you meant "who'll be in".
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Thank you for sharing!
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And these guys do have a few emotional issues between them, don't they?
There should probably be a couple more parts up soon.
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