Comments | morganreid_cm: Endogenous Opioid Polypeptide Compounds, PG-13/FRT

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Endogenous Opioid Polypeptide Compounds, PG-13/FRT

Aug 16, 2008 21:22

Title: Endogenous Opioid Polypeptide Compounds
Author: severity_softly
Rating: PG-13/FRT
Pairings: Morgan/Reid
Word count: ~2,000
Spoilers/warnings/author's notes: Spoilers aren't overt, but fic includes references from The Big Game/Revelations up through Elephant's Memory, and (vague-ish) references to drug use. Beta'd by the wonderful innerslytherin. :)

( You didn't need a genius to tell you that exercise releases endorphins into your body that make you feel good, but he tells you anyway, and in much greater detail than you'd previously understood it. )

rating: pg13, fanfic, author: severity_softly

Comments 32

bohofemm August 17 2008, 01:58:29 UTC

I love the way this is written. The third person POV is a nice touch. The words flow so lyrically. I like it. Kudos.

severity_softly August 17 2008, 02:05:19 UTC

Thanks! I was trying a new POV/tense for me, so I'm really glad it works. :D

derangedfangirl August 17 2008, 02:00:58 UTC

Freaking brilliant. That's pretty much all I can say. :>

That was great! Lovely work.

severity_softly August 17 2008, 02:08:27 UTC

Thank you! :D

innerslytherin August 17 2008, 02:03:34 UTC

I know I already told you how much I love this, but I wanted to comment anyway. I love the warmth in this fic. There's so much emotion, and Morgan is trying to take care of Reid, as usual, but it's obviously become a partnership in Morgan's mind. I love when he thinks about giving Reid a key, and the description of Reid as all reach and no power is such a great one. Also, of course, you do a fantastic job with the POV. It's so hard to pull off 2nd person and you have done it wonderfully. :)

severity_softly August 17 2008, 02:14:32 UTC

Thanks so much, love! I'm always happy when you like whatever it is I've decided to write. *g* And you know I was nervous about the POV/tense, so I'm glad it works! :D *HUGS*

tobimonkee August 17 2008, 02:28:46 UTC

Awww this is so sweet the POV works great and its always adorable when Morgan trys to take care of Reid

severity_softly August 17 2008, 02:29:50 UTC

Thank you!

joyincreation August 17 2008, 03:02:04 UTC

I writing this only a couple of seconds before Phelps swims his final swim, so that should tell you how much I love this. It was just so sweet, yet explored somethings that no other fic i've read has ever explored. Once again so jealous that I can't have it for myself! and if I hadn't already read your fic I might pause Phelps to finish it!

severity_softly August 17 2008, 11:54:53 UTC

Hee! Thank you so much! I'm flattered!

*sigh* You might actually make me use my ff account yet. ;)

joyincreation August 17 2008, 16:10:13 UTC

I was actually just trying to tell you how good it was but if you were to post this on ff I would die from glee!