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[morgan_cian]

Title: Home
Fandom: Original Fic
Summary: One lonely boy finds love in small town
Word Count: Approx. 1,800
Configuration: Male/Male, sweet boy love
Note: There is attempted noncon and discussion of childhood molestation. Lots of h/c and some angst but generally sweet where boy falls for boy
Rating: NC-17
Previous parts: Are located here

Comments

[chaoskir]

Your story is so full with love and I'm a sucker for such stories. You characters seem alive and I know I wrote it before but I do love the big love between the boys. No matter which boys get it. It's nice and good to read such stories. Thank you so much for the lovely characters in those fic. I enjoyed every word I read.

[morgan_cian]

*blush* It means a lot to me as a writer to know that my characters seem 'real'. As a reader (and I read a LOT) I want to connect to the characters and live vicariously through their experiences as I read. So that is the POV I take when I write. I want it to seem like you could sit down and have a cup of coffee or a beer with the boys. And I like the dynamic of two guys. They have emotions that usually aren't explored that well in mainstream het fic. So, your feedback is invaluable. It lets me know that I'm on target *hugs* MC

[chaoskir]

Oh yes, you are correctly / completely on target.

Thanks for your kindly words.
*hugsyouback*

[grneyedwoman]

*sigh* A chapter of this is what I needed today. Thank you!
Hugs

[morgan_cian]

I'm glad I could oblige, darlin', you are so very welcome *hugs* MC

[roseguel]

what a beautiful and emotional update :-)) rose

[morgan_cian]

thank you for the kind words, darlin', I'm glad you enjoyed! MC

[dotty_at_home]

I'm a sucker for a good love story and this is one of the greatest... But still, lovey, >this< cracked me up:

"He did whimper when Daniel’s thing nudged against his balls."

Thing? You have a problem with the word, um, cock?

*giggles and runs away after tousling your hair*

[morgan_cian]

ARGH!!!! *rolls eyes at self* THIGH!!! THIGH! It was supposed to be thigh and of all words I had to type, I had to type 'thing'...needless to say, even if you do like to yank my chain, thank you for the catch ;-P and its fixed!! MC

[dotty_at_home]

If you can give me grief over the word 'pubes', I can tease you about 'thing'. I figured it was probably unintentional.

And I only kid because I adore you. :-)

[morgan_cian]

Very unitentional, and I don't mind the grief at all, because I know you have my best interests at heart...I adore you as well...*snuggles* MC

[trueila]

I just adore this story. At first i thought that it strange that you write Texas and Home. But all of your stories are about love.
Thank You

[morgan_cian]

*grins* You are welcome, darlin'. It is strange that from the same twisted mind comes a story like Home. I agree with you, but it boils down to love as you said. All the varying roads to get there, dark or light, is fun to explore...*hugs* MC