Texas II part 22

[morgan_cian]

Title: Texas II
Fandom: Slave fic
Summary: Sequel to Texas. Everything is perfect now, right? This is Texas.
Rating: NC-17, Adult, FRAO, and any other rating that says not for kiddies!!

He knew his part as he followed a couple of steps behind Alonzo. Not Sal, Sal would have his arm around his waist and whisper in his ear. Stop it, he warned himself.

Comments

[maculategiraffe]

Oh, god, this is too sad, I can't breathe-- I can't imagine how intense this is for both Sal and Paul. They love each other so fucking much and both have so little hope left. Sal on his knees just smashes my heart to smithereens. I don't even know if I hope Paul agrees to give him that "one last time" or not.

I'm glad little Alex is still going to have JB. Poor little thing, such an innocent in all this.

[morgan_cian]

You think it's hard to READ? Try, being in my shoes when I wrote it, my heart was in my throat and my eyes were burning, but alas the way the muse guides, you follow *comforting hugs*

Alex has actually been my Sal of this fic, where I originally intended on going and outcome being far from what I planned, but he was needed...MC

[wickhouse2005]

Sorry I haven't commented much, but I did want to let you know that I've really enjoyed reading your Texas stories, what I like is that no one is 100% evil or good. Your characters like us are cable of being both.

Sometimes, love isn't enough, when the pain is too great, you have to walk away. Maybe Paul should if just until he can figure out who and what he is.

In the WIPS I've been reading, except for Slave Breakers, I seem to want the couples to uncouple.

[morgan_cian]

Wow, I'm honored that you commented...sometimes you put your writings out into the void and hope that someone is reading them...you are spot on about love and pain, and I'm glad you are enjoying the characters in this strange little world...If you don't mind, I'll friend you...if you get the time, please give me more comments, good or bad, it helps to feed the beast *grins* MC

[hawk_soaring]

Oh God, this just hurts so much. I'm still holding out hope for a happily ever after, but there is so much hurt to get over... *sob*

[morgan_cian]

Not much I can offer, darlin' *comforting hugs* MC