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morgan_cian

Texas 28 part 1

Feb 28, 2008 16:30

I'm home sick. Silly toddlers and their penchant for coming to school with 103 temps, what's a girl to do except get laid flat on my back, sore and aching with a restless mind. Can you believe I'm on the downhill skid in Texas? *sighs with relief* This section was going to be ridiculously long so I split it. Not going to class tonight to share ( Read more... )

texas, slavefic

Comments 9

hpstrangelove February 29 2008, 00:19:47 UTC

I'm happy and sad both...great update.

morgan_cian February 29 2008, 01:01:57 UTC

*hugs* Thank you, I'm glad it tugged at your heartstrings. MC

maculategiraffe February 29 2008, 10:13:37 UTC

Aw, this was lovely. Texas has come such a long way. I love this part:

The man knew he had to rein it in or his promise to never hurt his Kitten would be for naught.

And on top of that the Puppy was coming home and he couldn’t find the release for his tension there as well. As much as he trusted Jug, he had a feeling that the man would kill him rather than stop him if he got out of control.Despite his power, Texas is almost like a kid-- a spoiled kid who's never had to rein in his darker impulses, always had someone to hurt and take it out on. It's like Kyle is helping him grow up, realize that his actions can have serious consequences (that he can't handle-- like the loss of his Kitten), and that he has to learn control not only over others but over himself. Jug and Alonzo are helping too... I love the bit about how Jug would castrate him if he hurt Paul. Texas has a lot to learn about strength, and I think his feet are on the right path now ( ... )

maculategiraffe February 29 2008, 10:25:38 UTC

Oh, in my hurry to get to the next part I forgot to say I hope you feel better soon!!

morgan_cian February 29 2008, 15:19:05 UTC

Texas has definitely learned that it is not all about him. He has to think of how things will impact his Kitten if he wants to keep him.

Before it's all said and done we'll get a glimpse of a very young Texas and it will shed light on the type of man he turned out to be.

Its been to happy as of late, not so in the coming chapters. Just fair warning...MC

hawk_soaring February 29 2008, 23:06:10 UTC

Oh! *sniffle* So good ... so perfect.

morgan_cian March 1 2008, 00:41:13 UTC

Awwww *hugs you* thank you. MC

seether_79 March 2 2008, 06:11:41 UTC

Sorry I haven't commented, I haven't had internet for the lat three days. Mine doesn't come back until tomorrow and I'm using my sisters at the moment. Xcellant as always, you'll be hearing more from me soon :))))

helga1967 May 23 2009, 04:06:31 UTC

the description of the last time as master/puppy was great