Texas 27
Be patient with me. I'm not sure of this section either. I'm not looking for artistic affirmation, just some constructive criticism. Was this part believable, because I'm not sure if I was able to portray what I wanted. :-/ Thanks, MC
Title: Texas
Fandom: Slave fic
Summary: One cold ruthless man and two hot little slaves
Rating: NC-17, Adult, FRAO, and any other rating that says not for kiddies!!
Jug laughed as he opened the door to Alonzo’s suite. The Kitten was fairly quivering with excitement.
“You really want to see the Pup, don’t you Kit.” He got a vigorous nod in return.
The deep purple eyes narrowed at the sound of laughter, one rumbling deep and then a second much higher. Kyle’s mouth dropped open and scampered towards the sound.
“Kit, wait! We’ve got to be announced,” Jug called but the boy paid no heed.
Kyle pulled up short.
Master Alonzo was seated at his desk looking over papers and making notes. Paul sat curled in his lap, with his head against the man’s shoulder.
His brother said something quietly that even Kyle’s sensitive ears could not make out but it got a reaction out of Alonzo. Paul gasped and threw his head back as the man’s hand disappeared under the desk. Alonzo chuckled once again
Kyle was at odds with himself. His brother was happy and his collar was missing. He crossed his arms across his chest. He knew it was coming and he truly was happy. But their master had not released Paul yet. His gaze once again rested on his brother’s naked throat.
“I believe we have company, beautiful.” Sal said easily, keeping the teasing motion on the hot flesh in his hand.
“Mmph.” Paul replied, trying to gain more friction on his cock. He had found out in short order that Salvatore was an aggravating tease.
Alonzo gave the blonde boy an innocent shrug. His hand stilled at the sight of the dark frown on Kyle’s face. He kissed Paul placatingly when he heard the irritated whine. He then sat the boy up to face his twin in the doorway.
“Sal, please,” Paul whined but followed the man’s gaze. He was at once happy and then his heart thudded. Kyle looked like a thundercloud.
“Kyle?” The dark haired boy whispered, the look that his brother gave him before turning on his heel could only be described as betrayal. He could feel the warmth of Sal’s arms pulling him close.
Kissing the boy deeply, Sal eased him off of his lap. “I think this has him worried.” Paul felt the warm hand around his naked neck. “Kyle is deeply loyal to Texas, which is only right. You’ll need to talk to him, beautiful.”
Paul nodded as Jug stood uncertainly. “Hey Jug?”
“Yeah, kid?” Paul’s eyebrows shot upward, Kid not Pup. The giant just shrugged.
“I’m gonna need your help.” Jug nodded slowly as he grabbed some paper and a pencil.
He felt Sal’s curious eyes on his back. The boy did not realize just how many knew of his embarrassment. He kept the fact that he could not read hidden deep in himself. He felt a hot flush in his face at the fact that Jug was about to find out in short order.
Kyle was standing near a window, curled in upon himself and it broke Paul’s heart. His first instinct was to fly to his brother’s side and beg for forgiveness, anything to make Kyle smile again. But he knew to do so; he would have to give up everything that he gained. He would have to give up Sal and for once as much as he loved Kyle, he would not do it.
Sucking in a breath, he stood beside his twin and touched his shoulder. And again the hurt eyes rested on his bare neck. He gripped Kyle’s bicep and pulled him to the table. He then motioned Jug to sit across from them.
“I thought you would be happy,” Paul’s lower lip trembled. “Talk to me.”
Kyle glared at him and pointed to his neck and shook his head angrily.
“No,” Paul gulped and slid the sheet of paper in front of the blonde. “Talk to me.”
Kyle reached out and grabbed his face. Paul nodded his head slowly, even as the heat in his face flared once again. “Jug will read for me.” He hated that his voice seemed small.
Picking up the pencil hesitantly, Kyle gave Paul one last look before he began to write. He pushed the sheet to Jug and curled into his twin’s lap. Kyle cupped Paul’s face as Jug read his words.
“I am happy, but I am also worried and afraid. Master Alonzo will be good for you, but I’m scared that this is a dangerous game. What if our Master had walked in on you without your collar? He has agreed to listen and be fair, but his anger flares so quickly and his wrath knows no bounds. He has not released you, Paul. And I don’t think I can keep him from hurting you again.” Jug said the words quietly.
The dark haired one’s shoulders slumped. “I know, I know. But I think Sal would not allow it. He cares for me, Kyle.” And his brother smashed his mouth against his.
“I’m so happy for you, Paul, to know that someone is going to cherish you as much as I do.” Jug cleared his throat. “We are going to be separated. And for the first time in our lives it’s going to be okay.”
Paul sobbed and pressed himself against the warmth of his brother. Kyle looked up at Jug and made a shooing motion. He pulled Paul up and wiped his tears away. The blonde then pressed his finger against the trembling lips. They got to their feet and headed for a bed where they could hold each other and reconnect twinned around each other’s body.
Sal gave Jug a worried look.
“They’ll be okay, they're tough kids.” Jug said simply. “It’ll be best to bring Paul back to my Boss. Texas needs to see him while he is so strong and Kyle will be able to handle the parting.”
The blonde sat back and regarded the man in front of him. He was so blindly loyal to Texas and yet he looked vulnerable.
“You really love him too, don’t you?”
Jug coughed and looked around the room. “Yeah, what’s not to love? They are both good kids. Just had to be careful around the boss,” pale green eyes met bright blue. “I’m not what he needs though. I would never be able to make the distinction between his needs and my job. I’m glad he has you.”
“I won’t treat him like a whore, Jug.” Salvatore responded solemnly, “but he has too much passion for one person. I would never deny his affections for Kyle or for you.”
“Thank you.” The words were heartfelt.
Sal walked through his penthouse, making sure everything was settled for the evening. Kyle needed to return to Texas before the bastard stormed his home.
Looking in on Paul and his brother, his lips twitched upward. They were curled together, Paul surrounding Kyle’s slight form. Kyle’s head was tucked into Paul’s chest and their limbs were entwined. Salvatore could imagine them in their mother’s womb in the same fashion.
Jug stepped up behind and the giant’s features softened as well. “I’ll make it okay with the boss. Bring them in, in the morning.”
“And Texas?”
“It will be fine.” Jug was firm.
Title: Texas
Fandom: Slave fic
Summary: One cold ruthless man and two hot little slaves
Rating: NC-17, Adult, FRAO, and any other rating that says not for kiddies!!
Jug laughed as he opened the door to Alonzo’s suite. The Kitten was fairly quivering with excitement.
“You really want to see the Pup, don’t you Kit.” He got a vigorous nod in return.
The deep purple eyes narrowed at the sound of laughter, one rumbling deep and then a second much higher. Kyle’s mouth dropped open and scampered towards the sound.
“Kit, wait! We’ve got to be announced,” Jug called but the boy paid no heed.
Kyle pulled up short.
Master Alonzo was seated at his desk looking over papers and making notes. Paul sat curled in his lap, with his head against the man’s shoulder.
His brother said something quietly that even Kyle’s sensitive ears could not make out but it got a reaction out of Alonzo. Paul gasped and threw his head back as the man’s hand disappeared under the desk. Alonzo chuckled once again
Kyle was at odds with himself. His brother was happy and his collar was missing. He crossed his arms across his chest. He knew it was coming and he truly was happy. But their master had not released Paul yet. His gaze once again rested on his brother’s naked throat.
“I believe we have company, beautiful.” Sal said easily, keeping the teasing motion on the hot flesh in his hand.
“Mmph.” Paul replied, trying to gain more friction on his cock. He had found out in short order that Salvatore was an aggravating tease.
Alonzo gave the blonde boy an innocent shrug. His hand stilled at the sight of the dark frown on Kyle’s face. He kissed Paul placatingly when he heard the irritated whine. He then sat the boy up to face his twin in the doorway.
“Sal, please,” Paul whined but followed the man’s gaze. He was at once happy and then his heart thudded. Kyle looked like a thundercloud.
“Kyle?” The dark haired boy whispered, the look that his brother gave him before turning on his heel could only be described as betrayal. He could feel the warmth of Sal’s arms pulling him close.
Kissing the boy deeply, Sal eased him off of his lap. “I think this has him worried.” Paul felt the warm hand around his naked neck. “Kyle is deeply loyal to Texas, which is only right. You’ll need to talk to him, beautiful.”
Paul nodded as Jug stood uncertainly. “Hey Jug?”
“Yeah, kid?” Paul’s eyebrows shot upward, Kid not Pup. The giant just shrugged.
“I’m gonna need your help.” Jug nodded slowly as he grabbed some paper and a pencil.
He felt Sal’s curious eyes on his back. The boy did not realize just how many knew of his embarrassment. He kept the fact that he could not read hidden deep in himself. He felt a hot flush in his face at the fact that Jug was about to find out in short order.
Kyle was standing near a window, curled in upon himself and it broke Paul’s heart. His first instinct was to fly to his brother’s side and beg for forgiveness, anything to make Kyle smile again. But he knew to do so; he would have to give up everything that he gained. He would have to give up Sal and for once as much as he loved Kyle, he would not do it.
Sucking in a breath, he stood beside his twin and touched his shoulder. And again the hurt eyes rested on his bare neck. He gripped Kyle’s bicep and pulled him to the table. He then motioned Jug to sit across from them.
“I thought you would be happy,” Paul’s lower lip trembled. “Talk to me.”
Kyle glared at him and pointed to his neck and shook his head angrily.
“No,” Paul gulped and slid the sheet of paper in front of the blonde. “Talk to me.”
Kyle reached out and grabbed his face. Paul nodded his head slowly, even as the heat in his face flared once again. “Jug will read for me.” He hated that his voice seemed small.
Picking up the pencil hesitantly, Kyle gave Paul one last look before he began to write. He pushed the sheet to Jug and curled into his twin’s lap. Kyle cupped Paul’s face as Jug read his words.
“I am happy, but I am also worried and afraid. Master Alonzo will be good for you, but I’m scared that this is a dangerous game. What if our Master had walked in on you without your collar? He has agreed to listen and be fair, but his anger flares so quickly and his wrath knows no bounds. He has not released you, Paul. And I don’t think I can keep him from hurting you again.” Jug said the words quietly.
The dark haired one’s shoulders slumped. “I know, I know. But I think Sal would not allow it. He cares for me, Kyle.” And his brother smashed his mouth against his.
“I’m so happy for you, Paul, to know that someone is going to cherish you as much as I do.” Jug cleared his throat. “We are going to be separated. And for the first time in our lives it’s going to be okay.”
Paul sobbed and pressed himself against the warmth of his brother. Kyle looked up at Jug and made a shooing motion. He pulled Paul up and wiped his tears away. The blonde then pressed his finger against the trembling lips. They got to their feet and headed for a bed where they could hold each other and reconnect twinned around each other’s body.
Sal gave Jug a worried look.
“They’ll be okay, they're tough kids.” Jug said simply. “It’ll be best to bring Paul back to my Boss. Texas needs to see him while he is so strong and Kyle will be able to handle the parting.”
The blonde sat back and regarded the man in front of him. He was so blindly loyal to Texas and yet he looked vulnerable.
“You really love him too, don’t you?”
Jug coughed and looked around the room. “Yeah, what’s not to love? They are both good kids. Just had to be careful around the boss,” pale green eyes met bright blue. “I’m not what he needs though. I would never be able to make the distinction between his needs and my job. I’m glad he has you.”
“I won’t treat him like a whore, Jug.” Salvatore responded solemnly, “but he has too much passion for one person. I would never deny his affections for Kyle or for you.”
“Thank you.” The words were heartfelt.
Sal walked through his penthouse, making sure everything was settled for the evening. Kyle needed to return to Texas before the bastard stormed his home.
Looking in on Paul and his brother, his lips twitched upward. They were curled together, Paul surrounding Kyle’s slight form. Kyle’s head was tucked into Paul’s chest and their limbs were entwined. Salvatore could imagine them in their mother’s womb in the same fashion.
Jug stepped up behind and the giant’s features softened as well. “I’ll make it okay with the boss. Bring them in, in the morning.”
“And Texas?”
“It will be fine.” Jug was firm.