Texas III part 20

Oct 18, 2008 16:04

Story title: Texas III
Rating: NC-17
Configurations : M/m, M/F, F/m
Warnings: Angst, hurt/comfort, BDSM, and anything else I can think of as I write it!
Note: There is fraternal incest, be aware.
Word Count: Approx. 2,500
Summary: The conclusion of the Texas verse, Paul's Epilogue
A/N: A new standard disclaimer for all of my fiction, the work ( Read more... )

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hawk_soaring October 18 2008, 21:47:35 UTC
Wow... just wow. I'm continually amazed at how *strong* Kyle is. And Paul? He's still reeling -- poor boy.

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morgan_cian October 18 2008, 22:48:49 UTC
Yes and yes...I've been exploring more of Kyle as well as how far Paul has come...thanks for both of the wows *winks* MC

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lee_777 October 18 2008, 22:14:08 UTC
Thanks for friending me... not that there's anything in it for you, I'm afraid - that's what makes it a specially nice gesture on your part!

Cheers, Lee

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morgan_cian October 18 2008, 22:53:58 UTC
Call it a mutual admiration society *grins* You are kind enough to comment, so I wanted to gain a friend, no gestures needed...MC

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jayfray18 October 18 2008, 22:48:24 UTC
You really are trying to do us all in aren't you?

That was amazing, my first thought when you started with Alex and JB was NOOOOOOO, what about Paul? But you didn't let us down!

And Texas, holding Paul whilst still pointing the gun at Max, shows just how much Texas cares for his puppy, even though he may be Sals beautiful now, he was the puppy first.

And then the end, Kyle wanting that, just, well, am speechless about that, but can't wait to read it!

And Kitten claws, soooo good!!!!!!

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morgan_cian October 18 2008, 22:56:43 UTC
Hee....at least I'm telling this one linearly, instead of back and forth like the original Texas....I think Paul and Kyle have both changed Texas somewhat...and yeah, Texas cares in the only way that he knows how. I'm glad you enjoyed! MC

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shaynnaloves October 19 2008, 00:23:24 UTC
JB and Alex are absolutely adorable! So perfect. And I love how EVERYONE is seeing how strong Kyle is now. He's grown so much into his own person now that he and Paul are more separated. I love these boys! <3

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morgan_cian October 20 2008, 00:31:41 UTC
Exactly, they knew way back in the first Texas that they would change if they were seperated..we are now seeing just how much *hugs* I'm glad you are enjoying! MC

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me_ya_ri October 19 2008, 02:09:05 UTC
Aww, JB and Alex are so sweet! I'm all agog over Paul and his strength. Not to mention excited to see what happens with Kyle and Texas and still waiting for Frank, but I'll just leave this as an incoherent SQUEE! More Texas!!! *Happy Dance*

More soon???? *bats eyes at you*

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morgan_cian October 20 2008, 00:32:29 UTC
I've got you more, darlin'...the next part is up...*dances with you* MC

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