Week 1 - Trust Everyone, but Cut the Cards

[morettaallstar]

The Bellevue sign is loud and in a distractingly modern font compared to the old fashioned front of the hotel.

The midday sun is glinting off the windows, whose square framework clashes with the Rococo arches and columns.

Three kings and a whole world of difference in the architecture, thinks Chloe, and yet Vegas remains the same despite it: tacky

Comments

[swirlsofblue]

Love the way you have them interact.

[morettaallstar]

Thank you! :)

I really like these guys too - hence why none of them would shut up and the ending's not quite 100% - and I love the random Seb/Taline/Brendan thing that happened while I wasn't paying attention...

[sinnamongirl]

I really like their interactions and dialog! I like, you know, likable criminals, and you did that well.

[morettaallstar]

This is possibly a symptom of watching too many crime shows, but ah well. I like likeable criminals too. :)

[whipchick]

Really interesting characters! Neat to see their interaction.

[morettaallstar]

Thank you! :)

[alycewilson]

I knew there would be a hiccup!

[morettaallstar]

There always is! ;)

[m_malcontent]

Enjoy a good caper story

[morettaallstar]

Thank you! :)