Fic: ‘A question of trust.’

[morethanacandle]

Title: A question of trust.
Fandom: Star Wars
Rating: (G)
Time Period: During tPM when Padmé’s watching the message from Sio Bibble.
Summary: Obi-Wan asks her to stop watching the message and to trust.

Author's Note: This is quick ‘n’ dirty (for definition see the F. A. Q. or check this post for the definition).This story was inspired by the

Comments

[morethanacandle]

Thank you!

[lealynnkenobi]

That was amazing.

I believe I turned into a pile of goo. *la sigh* A lovely pile of goo.

You certainly have a knack for writing O/P. :)

[morethanacandle]

That was amazing.

I believe I turned into a pile of goo. *la sigh* A lovely pile of goo.
Thank you! (After you've reconstituted.)

You certainly have a knack for writing O/P. :)
I honestly believe that my Obidala isn’t very good at all. Although, I confess, I didn't see this story as an Obidala. =D

[armchairdm]

I love the amount of foreshadowing here..

[morethanacandle]

Thank you - it was fun to put in.

[londongirl27]

I have to confess - I haven't read much SW fic over the past several months. This fic is the first one I've read in a long time, and I'm glad I went with this one first. IMO, you captured the nature of their relationship so well in such a subtle yet meaningful way. The whole fic left me with a comforting feeling as well, which I liked. :)

Thanks for sharing this, F.J.! You're still the great writer that I've always known you to be. ♥

[morethanacandle]

This fic is the first one I've read in a long time, and I'm glad I went with this one first.
I feel honoured; thank you.

IMO, you captured the nature of their relationship so well in such a subtle yet meaningful way. The whole fic left me with a comforting feeling as well, which I liked. :)
I’m glad it gave you that - I wasn’t certain which way it might be seen by people when they read it.

Thanks for sharing this, F.J.! You're still the great writer that I've always known you to be. ♥
Thank you very much. I’m glad you enjoyed it!

[chameleon_irony]

This is very nice. I like the stilted formality of the dialogue, because it is how they both talk in the film. I think you've captured the essence of their personalities (and added the hints of an attraction, but I have no opinion about that :P).

[morethanacandle]

added the hints of an attraction
This was accidental! I honestly didn’t realise that I’d written that in until after this was finished and I was double-checking for typos.

I think you've captured the essence of their personalities
I’ve not watched this movie in approximately three years so to hear that I’ve captured their personalities is really wonderful to hear - thank you!